{"id":9345,"date":"2024-01-24T02:20:25","date_gmt":"2024-01-24T02:20:25","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/editing-and-improving-a-creative-story-based-on-instructions-and-feedback-it-had\/"},"modified":"2024-01-24T02:20:25","modified_gmt":"2024-01-24T02:20:25","slug":"editing-and-improving-a-creative-story-based-on-instructions-and-feedback-it-had","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/editing-and-improving-a-creative-story-based-on-instructions-and-feedback-it-had\/","title":{"rendered":"editing and improving a creative story based on instructions and feedback it had."},"content":{"rendered":"

i chose an prologue story, writing by floowing below requirments.<\/p>\n

An epilogue is an afterword, a conclusion, that shows what happens after the events of a piece of literature or work of art; a prologue is a separate introduction that presents relevant information to establish themes, imagery, or characters in art. Now you can create one of those for <\/span>Fahrenheit<\/span> <\/span>451<\/span>.<\/span><\/p>\n

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\u201cFor noon\u2026 when we reach the city,\u201d closes out our novel. Where is Montag going? What will his future look like? How can the ragtag group of \u2018wanderers\u2019 re-shape the broken world into a \u2018utopia\u2019? What else does Montag finally remember?<\/span><\/p>\n


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In contrast, \u201cIt was a pleasure to burn\u201d opens Bradbury\u2019s masterpiece. How did Montag learn to love destroying? How did Montag \u2018sleeplessly\u2019 follow his father and grandfather\u2019s example to become a firefighter? What patchwork memories of his past have a greater meaning?<\/span><\/p>\n


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Your task: <\/span>Write <\/span>EITHER<\/span> a <\/span>prologue<\/span> or <\/span>epilogue<\/span> that sets up or concludes <\/span>Fahrenheit 451<\/span> by focusing on <\/span>key themes from the novel<\/span> and <\/span>referencing specific details from the text<\/span>. Incorporate key characters (and traits), moments from the novel, or significant symbols\/details incorporated throughout the text in a new light. (Example: Mentioning<\/span> Professor Faber<\/span> <\/span>is not<\/span> a reference; mentioning <\/span>Professor Faber on a train to St. Louis<\/span> or <\/span>creating an earpiece<\/span> <\/span>is<\/span> a reference.)<\/span><\/p>\n


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Requirements\/Grading<\/span>: <\/span>MLA formatting, roughly 700 -1,250 word count (2 \u00bd – 5 pgs), fiction based on <\/span>Fahrenheit 451<\/span>. <\/span>Writing\/Grammar <\/span>(25%), <\/span>15 <\/span>underlined + specific references<\/span> (45%), <\/span>Creativity\/Originality <\/span>(25%)<\/span>, Formatting<\/span> (5%).<\/span><\/p>\n

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and i have got the feedback from my teacher, and I want you to improve the essay base on the feedback and suggestions. and here’s what the suggestions are. I did get a chance to review the first page or two. I specifically looked at the “references” you made to<\/span> <\/span>Fahrenheit 451<\/i>, and after reviewing them, I would encourage you to consider more<\/span> <\/span>SPECIFIC MOMENTS<\/i> from the text. While you present ‘concepts’ from<\/span> <\/span>Fahrenheit<\/i>, many of the underlined sections – from my perspective – do not reference specific moments from the text.<\/span><\/div>\n

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To help, I looked through an old email account and managed to find <\/span>one example<\/i> that a student used in the past. I am linking it below: https:\/\/docs.google.com\/document\/d\/1foHSfF2R2d3RA5kA8V93GjKzw-8wilumQWh2BDJacMs\/edit?usp=sharing<\/a><\/div>\n

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Although the writing and story could improve, they do a pretty good job on pages 2-3 of using SPECIFIC MOMENTS from the text in their writing. Again, they <\/span>do not<\/u> need to be direct quotes, but I should be able to distinguish the moment from the plot of the story that you are alluding to for most of your references.<\/div>\n
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i chose an prologue story, writing by floowing below requirments. An epilogue is an afterword, a conclusion, that shows what happens after the events of a piece of literature or work of art; a prologue is a separate introduction that presents relevant information to establish themes, imagery, or characters in art. Now you can create […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[54],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/9345"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=9345"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/9345\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=9345"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=9345"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=9345"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=9345"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}