{"id":6456,"date":"2024-01-15T06:39:05","date_gmt":"2024-01-15T06:39:05","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/im-trying-to-publish-it-please-make-the-necessary-changes-according-to-the-comment-given\/"},"modified":"2024-01-15T06:39:05","modified_gmt":"2024-01-15T06:39:05","slug":"im-trying-to-publish-it-please-make-the-necessary-changes-according-to-the-comment-given","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/im-trying-to-publish-it-please-make-the-necessary-changes-according-to-the-comment-given\/","title":{"rendered":"I&#8217;m trying to publish it (please make the necessary changes according to the comment given)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I feel like you were under a lot of pressure to produce something in a limited amount of time, and while I&#8217;d love to give you some positive comments, I&#8217;d have to look at it a little more closely, but in all honesty, I think your writing has gotten worse rather than better.<\/p>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>1) It&#8217;s clear that you&#8217;ve tried to incorporate my critique, but rather than flowing seamlessly into a single argument, it&#8217;s a patchwork of parts, and I&#8217;m not sure what the overall thesis is. Can you summarize in one sentence what you&#8217;re trying to argue in this paper, and highlight what makes it different from other papers that have come out in the literature on US-China competition and the choice of middle-income countries?<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>2) In terms of format, your paper has an overabundance of subheadings, which further reinforces the impression that it&#8217;s a patchwork. Subheadings are supposed to encapsulate key points to help the reader understand what&#8217;s coming next, but the subheadings themselves are bland and the dozen or so subheadings make it harder to read. Take a look at the paper I gave you for reference. It has significantly fewer subheadings and is much more readable.<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>3) I&#8217;m sorry to say, but it appears that you still lack the discipline to write an academic paper.<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I feel like you were under a lot of pressure to produce something in a limited amount of time, and while I&#8217;d love to give you some positive comments, I&#8217;d have to look at it a little more closely, but in all honesty, I think your writing has gotten worse rather than better. 1) It&#8217;s [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[36],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/6456"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6456"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/6456\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6456"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=6456"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=6456"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=6456"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}