{"id":44066,"date":"2025-06-19T20:22:54","date_gmt":"2025-06-19T20:22:54","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/healing-through-collaboration-public-health-approaches-to-reducing-community-violence-in-conflict-affected-borno-state-nigeria\/"},"modified":"2025-06-19T20:22:54","modified_gmt":"2025-06-19T20:22:54","slug":"healing-through-collaboration-public-health-approaches-to-reducing-community-violence-in-conflict-affected-borno-state-nigeria","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/healing-through-collaboration-public-health-approaches-to-reducing-community-violence-in-conflict-affected-borno-state-nigeria\/","title":{"rendered":"Healing Through Collaboration: Public Health Approaches to Reducing Community Violence in Conflict-Affected Borno State, Nigeria"},"content":{"rendered":"

Please use the Rubric , comment And the template to redo the presentation<\/p>\n

Comments on your presentation for HPAM 628.<\/p>\n

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  1. Purpose and objectives slide: You have a lot of text on this slide, which you don\u2019t really address in your narration. Also, this slide suggests that your presentation is mostly about collaboratives, which is not the case. You mention collaboratives but this does not seem to be your focus.<\/li>\n
  2. On the slide that describes public health approaches, you list several but do not mention them all. In addition, you say something about maternal mortality, which doesn\u2019t appear on the slide.<\/li>\n
  3. Right from the beginning, you could say clearly that successful public health approaches have several elements. You are going to focus on several of them in your presentation: strengthening collaboratives, empowering youth, building community resilience, and strengthening and expanding services. Then you can have a slide on each of these issues.<\/li>\n
  4. On the slide entitled Analysis of Collaboratives, you don\u2019t really analyze them. You just describe them. You need to focus more on the success factors, which you mention on the slide but do not talk about in your narration.<\/li>\n
  5. It is not clear to me how the \u201cGovernance and power dynamics\u201d slide fits into the presentation? It follows the collaboratives slide \u2013 but it seems to be about more than collaboratives? Thes power dynamics affect all public health interventions, right? Maybe it is part of background and context?<\/li>\n
  6. You have a slide entitled \u201cBarriers to Implementation\u201d \u2013 implementation of what? It is not clear.<\/li>\n
  7. Are you highlighting young people as a public health approach? Again, what you say about young people make sense, but it is not clear how it fits into the presentation.<\/li>\n
  8. At the end of the presentation \u2013 on the Recommendations slide \u2013 you talk about mobile services. You don\u2019t mention these services earlier in the presentation so this is confusing.<\/li>\n
  9. The conclusions slide should come before the Key Takeaways slide. <\/li>\n<\/ol>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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