{"id":42881,"date":"2025-04-25T15:32:18","date_gmt":"2025-04-25T15:32:18","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/rewriting-introduction-investigating-the-effect-of-different-coloured-light-spectra-on-the-behaviour-and-welfare-of-the-three-spined-stickleback-gasterosteus-aculeatus\/"},"modified":"2025-04-25T15:32:18","modified_gmt":"2025-04-25T15:32:18","slug":"rewriting-introduction-investigating-the-effect-of-different-coloured-light-spectra-on-the-behaviour-and-welfare-of-the-three-spined-stickleback-gasterosteus-aculeatus","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/rewriting-introduction-investigating-the-effect-of-different-coloured-light-spectra-on-the-behaviour-and-welfare-of-the-three-spined-stickleback-gasterosteus-aculeatus\/","title":{"rendered":"Rewriting Introduction-Investigating the effect of different coloured light spectra on the behaviour and welfare of the three-spined stickleback, Gasterosteus aculeatus."},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Please view attached files: a review paper to gain a good background of the species we held experiments on. View file named &#8220;Dissertation_brief_&#8221; for marking crtieria. View &#8220;Methodology-description-research_project&#8221; to gain an insight of how the methodology worked. View &#8220;failed_introduction_writing_piece-but_with_constructive_feedbacks_offered_could_be_used_for_reference_learning_what_to_and_what_not_to&#8221; a failed introdcution section that we could learn something from-especially look at the constructive feedback in the end. Please view the file &#8220;Introduction_Light_Spectra_on_fish_CORE_ideas_some_references&#8221;, to see how I would like to structure the Introduction section; a core information paragraph; A breakdown of what could be added to expand on the original core message paragraph; and my attempt to construct expanded paragraphs for each section within introduction-based on the core messages, with the help of AI-which could be potentially used as a reference to what to discuss. (Disclaimer: Many of the citations in the paragraphs were either inaccurately attributed, derived from unrelated species (e.g., non-stickleback studies used to support stickleback-specific claims), or could not be verified in the scientific literature. <\/p>\n<p>During the process of rewriting, please maintain the <strong>core structure and ideas<\/strong> we&#8217;ve developed \u2014 especially those related to light spectra, behavioural assays, and visual ecology. However, I kindly ask that you <strong>independently locate and cross-verify all scientific sources <\/strong>you intend to cite. Where no relevant peer-reviewed reference exists to support a particular claim, it&#8217;s preferable to <strong>revise, reframe, or omit<\/strong> that point rather than rely on weak or incorrect citations. The credibility of the final manuscript depends heavily on robust sourcing.<\/p>\n<p><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Please view attached files: a review paper to gain a good background of the species we held experiments on. View file named &#8220;Dissertation_brief_&#8221; for marking crtieria. View &#8220;Methodology-description-research_project&#8221; to gain an insight of how the methodology worked. View &#8220;failed_introduction_writing_piece-but_with_constructive_feedbacks_offered_could_be_used_for_reference_learning_what_to_and_what_not_to&#8221; a failed introdcution section that we could learn something from-especially look at the constructive feedback in [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[40],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/42881"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=42881"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/42881\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=42881"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=42881"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=42881"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=42881"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}