{"id":36593,"date":"2024-10-31T18:34:05","date_gmt":"2024-10-31T18:34:05","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/revision-of-balancing-the-freedom-security-trade-off-during-crises-and-disasters\/"},"modified":"2024-10-31T18:34:05","modified_gmt":"2024-10-31T18:34:05","slug":"revision-of-balancing-the-freedom-security-trade-off-during-crises-and-disasters","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/revision-of-balancing-the-freedom-security-trade-off-during-crises-and-disasters\/","title":{"rendered":"Revision of Balancing the Freedom\u2013Security Trade-Off During Crises and Disasters&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<div><\/div>\n<div>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; These are only feed<br \/>\nback note<\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 200%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">This was a good start for<br \/>\nthe assignment , You have a good introduction that explains a real life<br \/>\nsituation. You were able to incorporate three sources nicely. I did not see how<br \/>\nyour core values influenced your viewpoint for this essay or your perspective<br \/>\non this issue in society. Your intext citations had a couple errors that should<br \/>\nbe essay to clean-up, but you only had three sources on the Reference page.<br \/>\nThere was a section in the middle that said &#8220;Supporting Reasons&#8221;. I<br \/>\nwould get rid of the heading and make these paragraphs. It will help your essay<br \/>\nflow.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 1 at is this first sentence? Its all in caps and<br \/>\nends with a colon? <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 2 not on reference page the date is incorrect <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 3 you shouldnt have a heading for the thesis. It<br \/>\nshould be the final sentence in the introduction <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 4 paragraphs need to be 5-7 sentences long <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 5 you only need the page number if available. The<br \/>\nparagraph number is used for digital print or websites <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 6 need authors names in the intext citation since<br \/>\nthey are not used int eh beginning of the quote In-Text Citations: The Basics &#8211;<br \/>\nPurdue OWL\u00ae &#8211; Purdue University <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 7 what is your viewpoint on this topic? how does<br \/>\nyour core values influence your persepctive PAGE 3 <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 8 In-Text Citations: The Basics &#8211; Purdue OWL\u00ae &#8211;<br \/>\nPurdue University <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 9 You shouldnt have a heading for supporting<br \/>\nreasons. These should be individual paragraphs supporting a key point PAGE 4 <\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comment 10 References need to be on its own page<\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 200%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"> See attached documents<br \/><\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; These are only feed back note &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This was a good start for the assignment , You have a good introduction that explains a real life situation. You were able to incorporate three sources nicely. I did not see how your core values influenced your viewpoint for this essay or your perspective on this [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[198],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/36593"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=36593"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/36593\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=36593"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=36593"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=36593"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=36593"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}