Hi Mike,<\/p>\n
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I have used AI to assess the assignment against the provided rubric, which
\nhighlighted several areas for improvement. In addition to these suggestions,
\nI’ve uploaded the current draft, the assignment guidelines, and a sample
\nassignment to guide the writing style and structure.<\/p>\n
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Please note the approved topic: The Impact of Cloud-Based ERP Systems Although I previously shared this topic after receiving instructor approval, <\/p>\n I\u2019m not certain how much the new topic may alter the existing content, but I <\/p>\n \n Thank you!<\/p>\n Additionally instructions below:<\/span><\/p>\n Based on the guidelines, requirements, and rubric provided for your 1. Introduction (10 marks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n Score:<\/span><\/b> 8\/10<\/span><\/p>\n 2. Reliability & Quality of Score:<\/span><\/b> 12\/15<\/span><\/p>\n 3. Content: Analysis (30 marks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n Score:<\/span><\/b> 25\/30<\/span><\/p>\n 4. Clarity & Organization (15 Score:<\/span><\/b> 13\/15<\/span><\/p>\n 5. Format and References (10 marks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n Score:<\/span><\/b> 9\/10<\/span><\/p>\n 6. Grammar & Sentence Structure (5 Score:<\/span><\/b> 4\/5<\/span><\/p>\n 7. Conclusion (15 marks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n Score:<\/span><\/b> 12\/15<\/span><\/p>\n Overall Score: 83\/100<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n In summary, the draft demonstrates a solid foundation and a comprehensive Upon assessing the draft based on the assignment outline and specific 1. Title and Abstract<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n 2. Introduction<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n 3. Body\/Discussion (Themes)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n 4. Recommendations Section<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n 5. Conclusion<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n 6. References and Formatting<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n 7. Additional Alignment Points:<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n Addressing these areas should bring the draft into full alignment with <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" Hi Mike, I have used AI to assess the assignment against the provided rubric, which highlighted several areas for improvement. In addition to these suggestions, I’ve uploaded the current draft, the assignment guidelines, and a sample assignment to guide the writing style and structure. Please note the approved topic: The Impact of Cloud-Based ERP Systems […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[9],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/36366"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=36366"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/36366\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=36366"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=36366"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=36366"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=36366"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
\non Operational Efficiency in Maritime and Port Operations: Opportunities and
\nChallenges<\/b>.<\/em> <\/p>\n
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\nit seems the revisions did not fully incorporate it.<\/p>\n
\nwould like the assignment revised per the feedback. Please avoid using AI
\nsoftware for rewriting. The work currently lacks a human touch and doesn\u2019t
\nfully reflect master \u2019s-level writing. Ensure the final draft stays within the 12\u201315-page
\nlimit (approximately 3,750-4,500 words).<\/p>\n
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\nMGMT6000 literature review assignment on cloud-based ERP systems, I\u2019ll assess
\nthe draft against each rubric criterion and provide feedback for improvement:<\/span><\/p>\n\n
\n the topic and inquiry questions, with relevant background context on
\n cloud-based ERP systems in the maritime and port sector.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n mentioning the objectives of the literature review as required by the
\n assignment. Also, clarify the structure of the literature review and
\n briefly mention the themes to give readers an overview.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n
\nSources (15 marks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n\n
\n relevant, and support the topic of cloud-based ERP systems in maritime and
\n port operations.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n good, incorporating additional empirical studies that directly examine
\n cloud ERP implementations could provide more depth. Aim to explicitly
\n connect the sources to the research questions or objectives set out in the
\n introduction.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n addresses different themes, such as automation, data access, and supply
\n chain efficiency, demonstrating a solid understanding of the literature.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n across sources, especially where there are contrasting findings. Adding
\n examples from real-world applications (like Maersk or Nordic Tankers) and
\n relating them to literature findings is excellent; however, strive to
\n synthesize across studies to show where authors agree or disagree.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n
\nmarks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n\n
\n themes organized in a way that supports the narrative flow of the paper.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n between themes to improve readability. Ensure each theme logically leads
\n into the next, making the progression of ideas clear.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n APA 7th edition guidelines, and references are mostly correctly formatted.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n for consistency with APA style. Minor adjustments may be needed in the
\n reference list, such as italics for book titles.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n
\nmarks)<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n\n
\n formal academic tone.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n improve readability. Ensure all sentences are complete and avoid overly
\n complex phrasing for clarity.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n main findings and addresses future research needs well.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n any gaps in the literature based on the inquiry questions from the
\n introduction. Discuss any practical implications or recommendations based
\n on the review findings, as well as specific gaps that future research
\n should address.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n
\napproach to the literature review topic. Addressing these improvement areas can
\nstrengthen the review further and align closely with the assignment guidelines.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nguidelines, I\u2019ve identified the following key areas for improvement to fully
\nalign with expectations:<\/span><\/p>\n\n
\n topic-specific. The abstract provides a succinct overview but focuses more
\n on findings than methodology or objective.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n research objective, methodology (briefly mention it\u2019s a systematic
\n review), and main conclusions. This alignment with the guidelines will
\n better introduce the reader to the focus and purpose of the review.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n comprehensive, stating the topic and inquiry questions with relevant
\n background information.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n of the literature review, as this is specifically requested. Outline the themes<\/b>
\n or structure in the final sentences to orient the reader. A revised
\n introduction might look like:<\/span><\/li>\n\n
\n [narrowed focus] by analyzing recent studies under themes such as [list
\n themes briefly]. This structure allows an organized examination of
\n [purpose or relevance of each theme].\u201d<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n relevant themes, such as digital transformation, automation, real-time
\n data access, and supply chain management. Each theme provides a summary of
\n the literature and some synthesis.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n requirements for critical analysis and synthesis<\/b>, add:<\/span><\/li>\n\n
\n differ more explicitly. For example, in themes like cost reduction or
\n scalability, indicate which sources present differing views or emphasize
\n unique challenges.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n brief synthesis of how the reviewed literature collectively addresses or
\n leaves gaps in the inquiry question(s). This can clarify the significance
\n of each theme to the overall topic.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n practical and grounded in the literature.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n the review findings more explicitly. For example, if resistance to change
\n was noted as a barrier in the literature, link it directly to your
\n recommendation for change management and training<\/b> as a practical
\n solution. This will enhance the review\u2019s alignment with the assignment\u2019s
\n requirements for drawing actionable conclusions based on the literature.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n main findings and suggests future research directions.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n guidelines:<\/span><\/li>\n\n
\n inquiry question<\/b> from the introduction to ensure a cohesive closing.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n the literature leaves unfilled, such as limited research on long-term
\n impacts of cloud ERP on smaller port operations, if applicable.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n narrowed topic (cloud ERP in maritime operations) is critical for future
\n research or industry application, providing a practical closing
\n statement.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n to in both in-text citations and the reference list.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n for consistency (e.g., ensuring correct italicization and punctuation for
\n APA 7th edition).<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n
\n explicitly align with each theme to demonstrate a thorough and selective
\n approach, as required. If some articles are tangential, consider replacing
\n them with more targeted sources that strengthen the analysis.<\/span><\/li>\n
\n refining sentences for clarity and conciseness in dense sections can
\n improve readability and professionalism.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n
\nboth the outline and assignment requirements, reinforcing its quality,
\ncoherence, and relevance.<\/span><\/p>\n