{"id":28282,"date":"2024-06-17T23:58:36","date_gmt":"2024-06-17T23:58:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/essay-fix-for-college-entrance-needs-to-be-updated-properly-with-future-goals-would-like-to-major-in-business-management-and-work-or-own-a-real-estate-business-but-i-have-also-dreamed-of-being-an\/"},"modified":"2024-06-17T23:58:36","modified_gmt":"2024-06-17T23:58:36","slug":"essay-fix-for-college-entrance-needs-to-be-updated-properly-with-future-goals-would-like-to-major-in-business-management-and-work-or-own-a-real-estate-business-but-i-have-also-dreamed-of-being-an","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/essay-fix-for-college-entrance-needs-to-be-updated-properly-with-future-goals-would-like-to-major-in-business-management-and-work-or-own-a-real-estate-business-but-i-have-also-dreamed-of-being-an\/","title":{"rendered":"Essay fix for college entrance ( needs to be updated properly with future goals . would like to major in Business Management and work or own a real estate business but I have also dreamed of being an MLB player as a pitcher"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><br style=\"cursor: auto;\"><br style=\"cursor: auto;\"><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.38; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Baseball is in my blood. From the first time that I set foot on a mound, I felt I discovered something special. I was eight years old, standing in a field at Inwood, playing with kids two to three years older than me. Even though I did not have any experience pitching, I was able to strike them out and it would be a moment I would never forget. From that time on, I knew I wanted to pursue baseball.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.38; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Over the years, baseball has taught me many lessons. In my sport confidence is important because it helps play at my best level. When I lack confidence, I get nervous which causes me to make mistakes. Through my commitment to the sport, I have also learned to be patient, and a team player.&nbsp; I can apply what I have learned to other aspects of my life, like my schoolwork. I know it takes commitment to my schoolwork in order to perform at a high level just like baseball. When I first started, I took ownership of myself and my training since my dad could not afford it. Since then, I have taken learning about the sport into my own hands by watching videos and reading about baseball techniques that will improve my weaknesses in order to become a better player.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.38; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">I am a pitcher, in order to be a pitcher you need to have a strong arm, be agile, have the ability to call plays on a field, but you especially need to work hard and be committed. Every week I dedicate three to four days to baseball to increase my strength and agility with the goal to be the best player I can be. Another way in which I am committed is that I participate in travel baseball teams during the summer. I go to baseball academies in the Dominican Republic and I play for different travel baseball teams. Playing with other teams has taught me to be unafraid to meet and interact with new people. I have found this to be beneficial as interacting with many kids within a classroom setting can sometimes be nerve wrecking, but through baseball, I have overcome this fear. This dedication to learning has taught me that if you work hard in life you can succeed in anything you do.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">My high school experience was like no other. I was accepted into Beacon high school in New York City. I was there during my freshman year of high school which wasn\u2019t the best experience due to the fact that Covid and quarantine played a big role that year. I was doing school online and decided to join the<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">baseball team. After my year at Beacon which I am thankful for, for the next 3 years of my life I went down south to South Carolina and joined a Baseball Boarding school called P27. I was offered half a scholarship and joined the program from my sophomore year all the way until my senior year of high school. Being there allowed me to experience a better level and competition of baseball. There were some ups and downs while being there, I got injured my sophomore year and wasn\u2019t able to throw for about 6 months. Even though I wasn\u2019t able to throw, I learned how to do things properly such as lifting, taking care of my body, my arm, and eating properly. I came back the next year for my junior year and due to my progress after coming back from my injury I was the team&#8217;s starting pitcher my junior year. During my senior year I was converted to being a reliever\/closer. I met a bunch of great friends that I still get along with today, some are at some of the top schools in the nation and some got drafted. I am very grateful to attend the top baseball school in the country. I now plan to study business management remotely as I try to accomplish my dreams and get signed in the Dominican republic.&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Baseball is in my blood. From the first time that I set foot on a mound, I felt I discovered something special. I was eight years old, standing in a field at Inwood, playing with kids two to three years older than me. 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