{"id":26957,"date":"2024-05-27T21:11:37","date_gmt":"2024-05-27T21:11:37","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/literary-synthesis-of-the-two-short-stories-the-death-of-ivan-ilyich-three-deaths-by-leo-tolstoy\/"},"modified":"2024-05-27T21:11:37","modified_gmt":"2024-05-27T21:11:37","slug":"literary-synthesis-of-the-two-short-stories-the-death-of-ivan-ilyich-three-deaths-by-leo-tolstoy","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/literary-synthesis-of-the-two-short-stories-the-death-of-ivan-ilyich-three-deaths-by-leo-tolstoy\/","title":{"rendered":"Literary Synthesis of the two short stories &#8220;The Death of Ivan Ilyich&#8221; &#038; &#8220;Three Deaths&#8221; by Leo Tolstoy"},"content":{"rendered":"<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Write an&nbsp;essay of 1300-1500 words that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">synthesizes<\/strong>&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">two<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>texts<\/strong>:<\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">1)&nbsp; &#8220;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The Death of Ivan Ilyich&#8221; by Leo Tolstoy<\/em><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">2) &#8220;Three Deaths&#8221; by Leo Tolstoy<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<div>Both texts can be found on the pdf I have encrypted below.&nbsp;<\/div>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In the essay, establish and demonstrate a significant<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">connection or relationship<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>between the two texts. You might<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">compare<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>the two texts, exploring thematic or philosophical similarities; you might<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">contrast&nbsp;<\/em>the two, exploring differences. You might&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">apply<\/em>&nbsp;a relevant nonfiction text to one of the novellas, using it to analyze the novella and elucidate its meaning.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In your thesis statement, clearly state your synthesis &#8212; the precise connection you&#8217;re drawing between the two texts. In the proof section, use evidence from both texts to demonstrate that connection quoting and using MLA citation. In your conclusion paragraph, explain the significance of the connection you&#8217;ve demonstrated &#8212; What important insight or truth comes to light after looking at these two texts in combination?&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Below, I&#8217;ll describe a few possible approaches to this assignment:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Synthesizing &#8220;The Death of Ivan Ilyich&#8221; &amp; &#8220;Three Deaths&#8221; by Leo Tolstoy:&nbsp;<\/em><\/strong><span style=\"font-size: 1rem; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">you might answer a questions like, &#8220;What do the two texts say about mortality (or morality, or community, or marriage\/relationships, or social status, or the law, etc.)?&nbsp;<\/span>How<span style=\"font-size: 1rem; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;are the two texts conveying similar (or different) ideas about this theme?&#8221;&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Pursue&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interesting,<\/em>&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">significant&nbsp;<\/em>connections&nbsp;grounded in&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpretation<\/em><\/strong><\/h3>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">A main thing you want to<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">avoid&nbsp;<\/em>in literary synthesis is having just two parallel summaries. Sometimes, an attempt at literary synthesis will end up going something like, &#8220;This is what happened in one text, and this is what happened in the other.&#8221; To avoid this, you should&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpret&nbsp;<\/strong>both texts; identify their<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meanings<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>and<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">implications.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/em>Once you figure out the meaning or message each writer is trying to convey, you can then put them<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">in conversation<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>with each other. Is there some important difference, some tension between the two writers&#8217; implied world-views or philosophies? Is there significant overlap? Some<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">combination<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>of confluence and tension? &nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Of course, in order for this &#8220;conversation&#8221; to happen, the two texts need to be &#8220;talking about&#8221; the same thing. The first step in synthesizing two literary texts is identifying a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">common theme or subject<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>in both. If you identify that two texts are both saying<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">something<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>about, say, family dynamics, you can then compare what the two texts are&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">saying about<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>family dynamics.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 14pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">That is, this essay is building on the type of critical reading and critical thinking you did for Essay One. For Essay Two, you&#8217;ll interpret<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">both<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>texts in the way that you interpreted a&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">single<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>text in Essay One. Then you&#8217;ll explain the relationship between those two interpretations.<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">What I&#8217;ve described so far in this section applies to the synthesis of two<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">literary<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>texts. If you&#8217;re synthesizing a Tolstoy novella with a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">nonfiction<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>text, you probably won&#8217;t be interpreting the nonfiction text in the same way you would a literary text. Nonetheless, there should be a strong element of interpretation in your approach to the Tolstoy text, and the nonfiction text will likely clarify or deepen that interpretation.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In the conclusion paragraph of your essay, explain the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">significance<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>of your synthesis, what new or interesting thing &#8220;happened&#8221; as a result of it. What important insight was&nbsp;generated by looking at these two texts<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">in combination<\/em>? If the two texts convey complementary or overlapping meanings, does some richer, more nuanced version of that meaning emerge from the synthesis? If the texts convey conflicting meanings, has the synthesis shown us that one of those meanings is truer or more relevant in today&#8217;s world? &nbsp; &nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Strive for Focus and Specificity<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Another common pitfall when writing literary synthesis is<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">trying to compare too many things<\/em>, resulting in a jumble of unrelated parallels. You&#8217;re not comparing everything that happens in one text to everything that happens in another. Instead, you&#8217;re examining the specific aspects of the two texts that overlap in an interesting way. (A Venn diagram might be a useful thing to visualize.)&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">That is, your essay will be cohesive and meaningful if you find a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">specific point of comparison<\/em>. As noted above, a good point of comparison is a common<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">theme<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>shared by the two texts. However, you might find it useful to pursue an even more narrowly focused comparison. For example, you could focus on&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">characterization<\/strong>, comparing a character or set of characters from each text. You could compare overlapping&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">symbolic motifs<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>in the two texts; the way the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">plots<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>are structured; the way in which&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">voice<\/strong>,&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">point of view<\/strong>, or&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">figurative language<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>are used. Remember though, that all these things contribute to a text&#8217;s<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meaning<\/em>. Pointing out, for example, that Ivan Ilyich has a lot in common with the narrator from &#8220;The Semplica-Girl Diaries&#8221; would be a great start, but you&#8217;d ultimately want to compare these characters in order to elucidate the overlapping (or conflicting)<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meanings<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>in the two texts.&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">How to Structure The Essay<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">There will be more information about how to structure the essay later in the unit, but, for now, here&#8217;s a simple outline that&nbsp;should help you to visualize the essay.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Introduction (1-2 paragraphs):<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Prepare the reader for the thesis. Provide an introduction to your topic as well as a brief description of the two texts, with an emphasis on the aspects of the texts relevant to your thesis.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis statement (1-2&nbsp;sentences):&nbsp;<\/strong>Make a claim about the relationship between the two texts. Embed language in the thesis statement that makes the precise relationship between the texts very clear to the reader. Perhaps the meanings of the two texts&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">contradict<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>one another; perhaps there&#8217;s an interesting&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">tension<\/em>&nbsp;or<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">affinity&nbsp;<\/em>between them; perhaps a nonfiction text&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">illuminates&nbsp;<\/em>or<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">clarifies<\/i>&nbsp;some aspect of the novella, etc. &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof (3-4 paragraphs):&nbsp;<\/strong>Demonstrate the relationship you described in the thesis statement. Doing so will entail presenting textual evidence from the text, interpreting the texts, and explaining how the textual evidence and the interpretations represent the relationship described in the thesis. (Use PIE structure for every proof paragraph.)&nbsp;<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Conclusion (1 paragraph):<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Briefly&nbsp;restate the main points from your synthesis<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;and address the significance of your synthesis.<\/p>\n<p>Example:&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TWO IMPORTANT NOTES ABOUT ESSAY TWO&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h3>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">A counterargument-refutation paragraph is&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">not&nbsp;<\/em>required for this essay.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In the proof section, it&#8217;s important to&nbsp;<i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">actively and&nbsp;explicitly&nbsp;<\/i>synthesize the evidence from the&nbsp;two texts. Avoid simply presenting evidence&nbsp;from both texts and expecting the reader to figure out the connection. Explain the relationship between the evidence you&#8217;ve presented from the two texts. Even if the connection seems obvious to you, it probably isn&#8217;t obvious to the reader. &nbsp;<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay Two Structure &amp; Components&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">There is some flexibility in how you can structure this&nbsp;fairly complex essay, but there are also some foundational aspects of essay structure that should be there&nbsp;regardless of what&nbsp;choices you make about how to organize the essay.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Here is what should<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">definitely<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>happen in the different components of the essay:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INTRODUCTION<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>should prepare the reader for the thesis statement.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Provide an introduction to<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>your topic as well as a brief descriptions of the two texts, with an emphasis on the aspects of the text relevant to your thesis. Because there&#8217;s more information to set up at the beginning of the essay, you might consider writing&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">two<\/em>&nbsp;introduction paragraphs. &nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">THESIS<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">should come at the end of the introduction. (Please see the previous lecture on thesis statements for more information.)&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF section&nbsp;<\/strong>should&nbsp;1) Use textual evidence and&nbsp;analysis to prove the interpretive claims about the texts in the thesis statement; 2) Explain the relationship between the texts and their meanings; this explanation should&nbsp;reflect the relationship (synthesis) you&nbsp;establish in your thesis statement. &nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF section<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">should have<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">active<\/em>,<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>explicit<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>synthesis<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">. This does<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">not<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">mean placing evidence from both texts side-by-side and expecting the reader to figure out the relationship. Instead,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">explain<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>to the reader<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">why<\/em>&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">the evidence represents similar or different ideas.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF section<\/strong><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>should have a&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">balanced<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/strong>representation of your two sources.&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Because you\u2019re exploring a relationship between two texts,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">both texts<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>should get roughly<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>equal attention<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>in your essay.&nbsp;The main goal of this essay is to put the two texts in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">conversation<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>with each other.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Every&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF paragraph<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">should use<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">P.I.E.<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>structure\u2014<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINTS<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>should make<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claims<\/em>&nbsp;that set up what the rest of the paragraph will prove, and<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION<\/strong>&nbsp;(interpretation,&nbsp;synthesis) should come after the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>(textual evidence and analysis). The POINTS and the EXPLANATIONS in each proof paragraph should draw clear connections to the claim made in the thesis.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">CONCLUSION<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>should restate your position and address the significance of your synthesis. Do you think the ideas in the texts represent something true and useful, or not? Do these ideas have any particular relevance to contemporary issues? Do you think one writer has a more accurate or constructive set of ideas than the other?&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">How to Structure the PROOF Section of the Essay&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In the proof section, you&#8217;ll need to do a few different things. You&#8217;ll need to present evidence form both texts, interpret that evidence, and show a relationship between the two texts &#8212; all in a way that demonstrates the claim in your&nbsp;thesis statement. This is quite a lot to&nbsp;manage, so you want to be deliberate in how you structure the proof section, so that it communicates everything in a way that&#8217;s clear and easy to follow. Below are a few suggestions for how to structure the proof section. (These are approaches that have worked well for students in the past.) You might arrive upon a good structure that doesn&#8217;t fit into one of these templates, which is definitely okay.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Section Structure #1<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Each<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>proof paragraph presents evidence from<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">both<\/em>&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">texts, interprets that evidence, and synthesizes those interpretations. Here&#8217;s an outline representing what Structure #1 might look like: &nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">THESIS:<\/strong>&nbsp;&#8220;The Death of Ivan Ilyich&#8221;&nbsp;and \u201cThe Semplica-Girl Diaries\u201d both imply that status competition results in X, Y, and Z.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Paragraph #1<\/strong><\/span>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINT: &nbsp;<\/strong>&#8220;Ivan Ilyich&#8221; and &#8220;Semplica&#8221; both imply that status competition causes X.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Textual evidence and analysis from &#8220;Ilyich&#8221;&nbsp;[Transition to &#8220;Semplica&#8221; evidence]; Textual evidence and analysis from &#8220;Semplica&#8221;&nbsp;<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Interpretation of evidence from the two texts (how they both represent X), demonstrating the connection between two texts&#8217; meanings.&nbsp;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Paragraph #2:&nbsp;<\/strong><\/span>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINT: &nbsp;<\/strong>&#8220;Ivan Ilyich&#8221; and &#8220;Semplica&#8221; both imply that status competition causes Y.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Textual evidence and analysis from &#8220;Ilyich&#8221;&nbsp;[Transition to &#8220;Semplica&#8221; evidence]; Textual evidence and analysis from &#8220;Semplica&#8221;&nbsp;<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Interpretation of evidence from the two texts (how they both represent Y), demonstrating the connection between two texts&#8217; meanings.&nbsp;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Paragraph #3:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>&nbsp;\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINT: &nbsp;<\/strong>&#8220;Ivan Ilyich&#8221; and &#8220;Semplica&#8221; both imply that status competition causes Z.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Textual evidence and analysis from &#8220;Ilyich&#8221;&nbsp;[Transition to &#8220;Semplica&#8221; evidence]; Textual evidence and analysis from &#8220;Semplica&#8221;&nbsp;<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Interpretation of evidence from the two texts (how they both represent Z), demonstrating the connection between two texts&#8217; meanings.&nbsp;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Section Structure #2<\/strong><\/span><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Each connection\/synthesis is&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">explained over the course of<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TWO<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>proof paragraphs. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">first<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>proof paragraph interprets<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">one<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>text. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">second<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">proof paragraph interprets the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">second text<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">, and<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">then<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>explains how these ideas<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relate<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>to the ideas in the first proof paragraph. (The synthesis happens at the end of<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">every<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">other<\/em><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>proof paragraph.) You\u2019d likely have<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">two \u201cpairs\u201d<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">of paragraphs in the whole proof section. This is the paragraphing strategy that the&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">example essay&nbsp;<\/strong>uses.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Here&#8217;s an outline representing what Structure #2 might look like:&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis:<\/strong>&nbsp;The two texts say different things about X and Y in communities.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof One:&nbsp;<\/strong>&#8220;Forged Coupon&#8221;&nbsp;says ____ about X aspect of community.&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">(Textual&nbsp;evidence and interpretation)&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Two<\/strong>:&nbsp; &#8220;The Lottery&#8221; says ____ about X aspect of community. Here&#8217;s why that&#8217;s different from what&nbsp;&#8220;Forged Coupon&#8221; says about X.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">(Textual evidence, interpretation, and synthesis)<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Three:&nbsp;<\/strong>&#8220;Forged Coupon&#8221; says ____ about Y aspect of community.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">(Textual&nbsp;evidence and interpretation)&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Four<\/strong>:&nbsp; &#8220;The Lottery&#8221; says ____ about Y aspect of community. Here&#8217;s why that&#8217;s different from what&nbsp;&#8220;Forged Coupon&#8221;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/em>says about Y.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">(Textual evidence, interpretation, and synthesis)<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Section Structure #3<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">first<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">proof paragraph is devoted to<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpreting one text<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">; the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">second<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>is devoted to<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpreting the other<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">final<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>proof paragraph is devoted to exploring and explaining the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relationship&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">between the two texts. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">synthesis<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>all happens in one proof paragraph.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Here&#8217;s an outline representing what Structure #3 might look like:&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis:<\/strong>&nbsp;The two texts say different things about X in communities.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof One:&nbsp;<\/strong>&#8220;The Forged Coupon&#8221; says ____ about X aspect of community.&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">(Textual evidence and interpretation)<\/strong><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Two<\/strong>:&nbsp; &#8220;The Lottery&#8221; says ____ about X aspect of community.&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">(Textual evidence and interpretation)<\/strong><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Three:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>An&nbsp;in-depth explanation of how the two texts contrast with one another on the subject of X. (<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Synthesis)<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Evidence &amp; Synthesis<\/strong><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Your thesis statement will establish a relationship between the two texts you&#8217;ve chosen, but then, of course, you&#8217;ll&nbsp;need to demonstrate that connection in the proof section using relevant&nbsp;textual evidence, analysis, and interpretation.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Below is an outline of a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">proof paragraph<\/strong>&nbsp;that provides an example of how to \u201cpair\u201d evidence from two sources. Notice how there&#8217;s a sort of &#8220;organic&#8221; connection between the passages selected from the two texts &#8212; the paragraph combines two passages that relate to literal money. This ends up being a good starting point for&nbsp;examining what the two texts say about the topic of &#8220;materialism.&#8221; As you figure out what evidence to select from each text, and how to pair the evidence from the two texts, consider doing&nbsp;something similar. Look for moments in the two text that have an &#8220;organic&#8221; connection, that use similar symbols or represent similar experiences.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Also pay particular attention to the &#8220;explanation&#8221; section in the outline below. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">red<\/strong><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>part provides&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpretation&nbsp;<\/strong>of the&nbsp;<\/span>evidence; the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">purple<\/strong><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>part<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">synthesizes<\/strong>, explaining the connection. (This paragraph, but the way, uses the &#8220;Proof Structure #1&#8221; described above. &nbsp;<\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">THESIS:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">and<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\u201cBattle Royal\u201d<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">suggest that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">an ideal community can only take shape once materialism and the hierarchies that come with it have been abandoned.<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINT:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>The phalanx\u2019s protection of the Pirate&#8217;s money in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em>&nbsp;and the symbolism of the electrified coins in &#8220;Battle Royal&#8221; both represent how materialism and hierarchy must be abandoned for an ideal community to take shape.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION\/EVIDENCE 1:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Quotes\/paraphrases depicting the way in which Danny\u2019s friends protect the Pirate\u2019s bag of money, with emphasis on the way in which the money \u201cstops being money\u201d and instead becomes representative of the bonds of the phalanx itself.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION\/EVIDENCE 2:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Quotes\/paraphrases depicting the coins on the electrified mat, with emphasis on how the coins are a very tangible representation of the connection between materialism and destructive hierarchy\u2014the boys are made to humiliate themselves and subject themselves to pain as they scrabble for the money, reaffirming their \u201clowness\u201d in the hierarchy. &nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The bag of money in TF is a potent symbol of how once money and materialism are removed from the equation, a community can begin to thrive. The coins in \u201cBattle Royal\u201d symbolize the corrupting influence of materialism on communities.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Though one text shows how the elimination of materialism unites, and the other shows how materialism corrupts, they are both making the same fundamental point\u2014materialism creates hierarchy, competition, and cruelty, which are values antithetical to the construction of an ideal community.&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; font-size: 1.5em; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/strong>When crafting your own synthesis, organizing evidence into proof paragraphs, and reviewing your work, ask yourself the following questions about your evidence and synthesis:&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Does it seem reasonable to compare these two pieces of evidence? Is it clear that they relate to one another?<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Does the evidence from the two texts represent the similarity or difference described in the thesis?&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Have you<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">explained<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>what the evidence<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">means<\/em>&nbsp;(interpretation) and why it represents the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relationship<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>you asserted in your thesis (synthesis)?&nbsp; &nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The Conclusion Paragraph<\/strong><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/strong><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The conclusion paragraph should first&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">restate your position, and then address the significance of your synthesis. That is, there&nbsp;should be two parts to the conclusion:<\/span><\/p>\n<ol style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Summarize<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>the main points you made so that the reader leaves your essay with a clear sense of the interpretations and connections that were most&nbsp;important in the essay. &nbsp;&nbsp;<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Address the&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">significance<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>of your synthesis. One way (though not the only way) to approach this:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">evaluate the<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>ideas<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>in the two texts you&#8217;ve interpreted and synthesized. Do you think the ideas in the texts represent something true and useful, or not? Do they shed light on any pressing issues in today&#8217;s society? If the two texts forward opposing ideas, do you think one writer has a more compelling set of ideas than the other?<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In this (slightly edited) conclusion paragraph from the example essay, the second part, in which the writer evaluates the ideas about community in the two texts, is in&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">bold<\/strong>.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>and \u201cThe Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas\u201d convey ideas about how&nbsp;communities should operate &#8212; and how they shouldn&#8217;t. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">paisanos<\/em>&nbsp;in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat&nbsp;<\/em>illustrate how acceptance of diversity and forgiveness contribute to the ideal functioning of a community, while the citizens of Omelas illustrate how rejection of diversity and dependence on punishment without forgiveness make it impossible for a community to thrive.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In American society, diversity and forgiveness are two important keywords that deeply relate to its history and culture. America itself was built by immigrants and has been made strong by accepting many different people from different countries and cultures. The fair jurisprudence system and the mature political system of democracy are also important parts of America that closely relates to lawful punishment and forgiveness. However, contemporary American society faces serious perils as these two fundamental values are slowly being reduced and undermined within communities and the nation as a whole. By illustrating how a &nbsp;community should and should not operate, both &nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>and \u201cThe&nbsp;Ones Who Walk Away from Omelas\u201d teach an important lesson that a community can only thrive and progress when acceptance of diversity and forgiveness are firmly rooted within the foundation of the community.<\/strong><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay Two Sample Outline<\/strong><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Below is an example of how an entire literary synthesis essay could be structured. Here the writer is using &#8220;Strategy #1&#8221; for the proof section.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INTRODUCTION:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Two paragraphs. The first will be about communities,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">the difficulty of forming communities, and how capitalist values like materialism and teleological thinking work against communities. The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">second paragraph will introduce<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;and the story \u201cBattle Royal.\u201d In this paragraph I will describe the texts briefly but also preview the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">connection by explaining how, while<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">they are very<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">different,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">both diagnose a similar set of problems and solutions related to community.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">THESIS:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>(<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">This will come at the end of the second<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">paragraph<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.)&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat suggests that an ideal community can only take shape once the community has abandoned the main pillars of capitalist society\u2014materialism, social hierarchies, and teleological thinking. \u201cBattle Royal\u201d also represents the incompatibility of capitalist values and thriving communities by portraying a deeply corrupted community that is characterized by materialism, hierarchy, and teleological thinking.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF PARAGRAPH&nbsp;<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">1:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">I will compare the most vivid examples of actual currency in the two texts\u2014the Pirate\u2019s bag of money and the coins on the electrified mat. Both images function symbolically and show that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">materialism\u2014and the competition and hierarchy that come with it\u2014is destructive to community<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF&nbsp;PARAGRAPH&nbsp;2:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">I will compare the structure of the communities in the two texts\u2014in \u201cBR\u201d it\u2019s rigidly and racially hierarchical; in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TF<\/em>&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">the organization is more spontaneous; there is no rigid hierarchy. Instead, people fill different roles as their strengths and the situations require.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Both texts show that rigid hierarchies hurt communities<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">PROOF PARAGRAPH 3:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">I will compare the underlying philosophy of the two communities\u2014Danny\u2019s friends are nonteleological, while the culture of \u201cBR\u201d is teleological. I\u2019ll present evidence from Ch. XIV in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TF<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>to show nonteleological thinking, and \u201cBR\u201d\u2019s narrator\u2019s pursuit of success as representative of his adaptation to teleological thinking.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Both texts imply that teleological thinking, the ethos of capitalism, creates corrupted communities, and nonteleological thinking creates good ones<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">CONCLUSION:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">I will describe how both texts deliver a very important message, one that resonates today\u2014we live in a state of radical inequality and cultural division, the root cause of which is capitalism and the hierarchies it demands.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay Two Goals\/Grading Rubric<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Below is a list of things you&nbsp;should accomplish in Essay Two. These are also the criteria I&#8217;ll be using in the grading rubric for the essay.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<ol style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Effective&nbsp;synthesis (critical thinking).<\/strong>&nbsp;The essay clearly conveys a meaningful connection between the two texts. The synthesis is&nbsp;<i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">active&nbsp;<\/i>and&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">explicit<\/em><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/strong>&#8212; Rather than&nbsp;placing evidence from both texts side-by-side, the writer<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">explains<\/i><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>the relationship between the two texts.&nbsp;<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Effective interpretation (critical thinking).<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>The synthesis is based on insightful interpretations of the texts. Rather than comparing surface-level characteristics of the two texts, the synthesis describes a relationship between the texts&#8217;<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meanings<\/em>. &nbsp;<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Persuasive evidence.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>The proof paragraphs persuasively support the synthesis claim in the thesis, using robust, germane textual evidence; interpretation; and thorough explanations of the relationships between the texts. &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay unity.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>Each part of the essay clearly relates to the thesis statement. There are no aspects of the essay that seem irrelevant or unrelated to the central claim in the thesis or the essay&#8217;s purpose, which is to prove the thesis.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Introduction paragraph\/s.&nbsp;<\/strong>The first paragraph\/s of the essay&nbsp;prepare the reader for the synthesis and does some, if not all, of the following: establishes the theme being explored, introduces the texts, explains why&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">these<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>two texts are worth comparing, defines key terms.&nbsp;<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis statement.<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>The thesis is arguable and focused, responds to the essay prompt, and previews the rest of the essay. The thesis makes a claim about the relationship between the two texts.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/li>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">It should make a claim that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">sets up all of the key ideas in the proof paragraphs<\/strong>, preparing the reader for what&#8217;s to come in the essay.<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">It should be<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">clear, concrete, and succinct<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>enough that the reader can understand it, hold it in their mind, and use it to navigate the rest of the essay. (The reader should be able to easily and quickly relate each proof paragraph to this central claim.)<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">It should be<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">arguable and interpretive<\/strong>. It shouldn&#8217;t merely convey surface level observations about the texts. It should convey a claim about their<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meaning<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>that requires evidence, analysis, and interpretation to support.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/ol>\n<div>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">For the literary synthesis essay, your thesis will basically be<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">two<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>interpretive claims, one about each text. The thesis will also state the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relationship<\/em>&nbsp;between the&nbsp;two interpretations. Simply put, do the two texts convey<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">similar<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>or<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">different<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>ideas?&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The thesis should clearly answer these two questions:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">What do the two texts say about a shared theme you&#8217;ve identified?<\/i><\/strong><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">How do these two meanings relate to one another?<\/em><\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">If<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>the thesis asserts a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">difference<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>between the two texts, the differing perspectives should still be<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">related<\/em>. That is, you\u2019re looking more for an<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">oppositional<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relationship<\/em><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>rather than a simple<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">difference<\/em>. You want to put the two texts &#8220;in conversation&#8221; with each other. You want to avoid an essay (and a thesis statement) that simply bundles together two separate &#8220;monologues.&#8221;&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">***<\/span><\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Remember that a strong thesis statement will be<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&#8220;arguable and interpretive.&#8221;<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong>That is, in addition to comparing the observable characteristics of the two texts, you want to also compare their meanings. In fact, what you say about the observable characteristics of the two texts&nbsp;should clarify their meanings and how those meanings relate to each other.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">For example, in your synthesis essay, you might compare the narrative structures of the two texts; you might compare the personalities and experiences of two characters; you might show that the two communities in the two texts have similar or different values. This sort of synthesis is great, and will likely constitute a lot of the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">evidence&nbsp;<\/em>in your essay. But I&#8217;d recommend foregrounding an answer to the &#8220;So what?&#8221; question. If characters from the two texts are different, what does that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">mean<\/em>? Are the texts communicating different<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">ideas<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>through those two characters? &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">That is, in order to get into &#8220;arguable&#8221; territory, you want to do a bit more than point out similarities or differences between the two texts that most readers could easily see. That&#8217;s part of it for sure, but things get interesting when you address the&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">significance&nbsp;<\/em>of those similarities and differences, the way in which the two texts interact at the level of&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meaning<\/em>.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">***&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Two good &#8220;literary synthesis&#8221; thesis statements<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In the examples below, you&#8217;ll see that thesis statements make arguable, interpretive claims<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">and&nbsp;<\/em>establish a relationship between the two texts.&nbsp;The interpretive claims are in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">blue<\/span>. The parts of the thesis statements that establishes the relationship (i.e., the synthesis) between the two texts is in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">red<\/span>. (The texts in these examples weren&#8217;t assigned in this class.)<\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>suggests that a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">tightly knit community can honor the individuality of each community member; rather than erasing diversity, a community can embrace it<\/span>. \u201cThe Lottery\u201d<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">offers a much more pessimistic view of community<\/span>, suggesting that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">any cohesive community is susceptible to conformity and the abolition of diversity<\/span>.<\/strong><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Why this works:&nbsp;<\/strong>Notice how there are arguable, interpretive claims about both of the texts. The writer isn&#8217;t yet showing how the surface-level features of the texts relate to each other. Instead, they&#8217;re saying something about the&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meanings<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>and&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">ideas<\/em>&nbsp;represented in the two texts.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/i><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>conveys the&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">idea&nbsp;<\/em>that diversity and individuality can survive in communities, while &#8220;The Lottery&#8221; conveys the&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">idea<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>that community tends to erase these things. Moreover, the thesis contains a very clearly articulated<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relationship&nbsp;<\/i>between theses ideas &#8212; they&#8217;re opposing, with &#8220;The Lottery&#8221; conveying a &#8220;more pessimistic&#8221; set of ideas about community.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>represents how<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>a community can only begin to thrive once capitalist values\u2014specifically social hierarchy based on wealth\u2014have been shed<\/span>. \u201cBattle Royal\u201d provides<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">a similar critique<\/span>, representing how<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">these same capitalist values are the foundation for corrupt communities<\/span>.<\/strong><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Why this works:&nbsp;<\/strong>As with the previous example, we have two arguable, interpretive claims, one about each text. And agin we see a clearly articulated<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">relationship<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>&#8212; the two texts convey &#8220;similar&#8221; ideas. Both texts are, aparrently, critiquing the same thing and the substance of the critiques is similar. It&#8217;s worth examining that relationship a bit more closely though. One way to describe it is that the two texts are making the same point &#8220;from opposite directions.&#8221;&nbsp;To put it simply,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat&nbsp;<\/em>is showing the reader all the good things that happen when you get rid of certain capitalist values, and&nbsp;&#8220;Battle Royal&#8221; shows all the bad things that happen when a community embraces these same values. So, even though one is showing something positive and the other is showing something negative, they both ultimately critique that same set of values. The similarities you find between the two texts you choose may be more straightforward, but do keep an eye out for the ways in which the two texts convey similar<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">ideas<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>but with different emphases or from different perspectives.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">You might have noticed that these two thesis statements don&#8217;t say much about the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">content<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>of the texts.&nbsp;<\/strong>There isn&#8217;t anything about the characters, the plot, the imagery, the narrative structure, etc. Remember that your thesis statement should be reasonably succinct. This can be a challenge with a synthesis, as there&#8217;s a lot of information to get across in the thesis statement. The way the writers of these thesis statements have chosen to solve that problem is to focus only on the interpretations, the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meanings<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>in the two texts and how those meanings relate to each other. However,&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">elsewhere in the essay<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>the writers would need to, of course, get into the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">content<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>of the texts. The introduction paragraph\/s should orient the reader to what happens in the two narratives, and the proof paragraphs should pair evidence from the two texts in order to demonstrate the claims in the thesis statement. You might end up taking a different approach, saying something about the content of the texts in the thesis statement. This is perfectly fine; just make an effort to keep the thesis from getting unwieldy or cumbersome.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"color: inherit; font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto; background-color: rgb(27, 29, 32);\">8.&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\">Proof paragraphs.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit;\">Each proof paragraph&nbsp;is focused and fully developed, using PIE structure.&nbsp; Each proof paragraph begins with a topic sentence that supports the thesis and makes an assertion about the text\/s (POINT). Each proof paragraph then provides evidence from the text\/s supporting the claim in the topic sentence (INFORMATION). Each proof paragraph then concludes with&nbsp;an explanation of why and how the evidence proves the claim in the &#8220;point&#8221; (EXPLANATION).&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"color: inherit; font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-size: 1.5em; background-color: var(--color-6); font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\">Improving your proof paragraphs using P.I.E.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n<h3 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 1.5em; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/strong><\/h3>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Nearly every student made a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">specific-to-general<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpretive<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>claim in the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">thesis statement, which is great<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">For Essay Two, such a statement would go something like this \u201cThese two texts both represent this general principle about status competition (or authority or mortality, etc&#8230;).\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">What some students<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">struggled<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>with was making<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">similar interpretive claims<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">in the proof paragraphs. Such claims should happen in the &#8220;P&#8221; and &#8220;E&#8221; of a P.I.E. paragraph &#8212; that is, in the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINT<\/strong>, the first sentence of the paragraph,&nbsp;and in the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION<\/strong>, which comes at the end of the proof paragraph, after the INFORMATION (evidence).<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINTS for Essay Two<\/strong><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The first sentence of a proof paragraph in an&nbsp;academic essay should make a&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim<\/em>, an arguable assertion that supports or echoes the arguable assertion in the thesis&nbsp;statement. This is why, in the P.I.E strategy, this first sentence of a proof paragraph is&nbsp;referred to as a &#8220;point&#8221;&nbsp;rather than, say, a &#8220;topic&nbsp;sentence.&#8221;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">A common misstep is to start describing evidence at the very&nbsp;beginning of a proof paragraph.<\/strong>&nbsp;In essays about literature, this might take the form of describing some aspect of the story or poem. This should happen in the &#8220;information&#8221; (I) section, not in the &#8220;point.&#8221; When you begin a&nbsp;proof paragraph with&nbsp;evidence, the reader doesn&#8217;t know what point it&#8217;s supposed to prove. So, you want to start each proof paragraph with a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">point<\/em>, a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>that the textual evidence and analysis (&#8220;information&#8221;) proves in the second part of the paragraph.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">As noted above, the point should support or echo the arguable claim in the thesis statement. If your thesis statement makes a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim about<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/em>a work of literature (which it&nbsp;should), then the first sentence of each proof paragraph should also make a&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim about<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>that work of literature. &nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The first sentence of a proof paragraph in an<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpretation<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>essay&nbsp;should do something like this:&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&#8220;X aspect of the text<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">represents<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>the general idea I described in the thesis.&#8221;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The same basic principle applies to proof paragraphs for<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">synthesis<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>essays. Below are some examples of what POINTS for Essay Two should (and shouldn&#8217;t) do.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">SAMPLE THESIS<\/strong>: Both&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">and<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>\u201cBattle Royal\u201d<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">suggest that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">an ideal community can only take shape once materialism and the hierarchies that come with it have been abandoned<\/strong><\/span>.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TWO EXCELLENT POINTS (first sentences of proof paragraphs):<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The Pirate\u2019s bag of money, and the way in which Danny\u2019s friends honor it,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">is representative of the way in which<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">communities must forgo materialism and individual greed in order to thrive.<\/strong><\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">There are vivid examples of actual currency in the two texts\u2014the pirate\u2019s bag of money and the coins on the electrified mat. Both images<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">function symbolically and show that<\/strong><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">materialism\u2014and the competition and hierarchy that come with it\u2014is destructive to community.<\/strong><\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">*The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claims<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>in the sentences are in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">red<\/strong><\/span>. Notice how the claims line up with the interpretive claim in the thesis (also in red).&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">*With sentences like these, there&#8217;s a&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>that sets up what the rest of the paragraph will prove. This helps the reader understand what the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">purpose<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/em>of the paragraph is at the very beginning of it<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">*A<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim&nbsp;<\/em>(or &#8220;point&#8221;)&nbsp;at the beginning of a proof paragraph works better than starting a proof paragraph with evidence or a description of something from the text. When you start a proof paragraph with a description of something from the text, the reader doesn&#8217;t know what the paragraph is setting out to prove, what the purpose of the evidence is.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TWO NOT-SO-GOOD POINTS\/TOPIC SENTENCES:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Once the Pirate reveals that he is saving money for a noble goal, Danny\u2019s friends protect it, and the bag of money becomes something other than currency for the friends; instead&nbsp;it becomes a representation of their bond.&nbsp;<\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Communities can only thrive when they stop being overly concerned with material wealth, and begin to honor more immediate and human values like friendship and loyalty.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">*The first one would work well in the INFORMATION section&#8211;it describes some evidence, but it&#8217;s not making a point; there&#8217;s no interpretive<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">claim<\/em>. The second one doesn&#8217;t have a stated connection to the texts.&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION for Essay Two<\/strong><\/h4>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">In Essay One<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">most students did a very good job providing<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">strong summaries of evidence<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">in the proof paragraphs, and insightful<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">commentary<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>about the text, its imagery, the characters and their motives, etc. This is exactly what you want in the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>section; this is the concrete evidence that proves your point.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">However, at the ending of the proof paragraphs, you also need to provide<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>EXPLANATION<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">, which means drawing a<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">connection&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">between the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">evidence<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>in the text and the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">general claim about the text\u2019s<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">meaning<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">in your<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">thesis<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">At the end of each proof paragraph, you should have an answer to questions like this:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\u201cWhat does<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">all of<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>this stuff from the text I just described REPRESENT? How does this prove some part of the general meaning of the text I described in the thesis?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">If, at the end of the paragraph, you\u2019re<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">still only talking about the text itself<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">, and<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">not<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">what this aspect of the text<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">SAYS ABOUT THE THEME<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">, you\u2019re not finished.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>section, for this essay, might also be where you SYNTHESIZE, making a clear<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">connection<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>between the two texts, or articulating the<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">differences<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h4 style=\"margin: 6px 0px; font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.5; cursor: auto;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Proof Paragraph Outline<\/strong><\/h4>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">As noted above, you can use P.I.E. as a way to frame your evidence and explain its meaning. In the &#8220;P&#8221; and &#8220;E&#8221; sections, you&#8217;re weaving<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpretation<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>and<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">synthesis<\/em>&nbsp;into your proof paragraph. In<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">red<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">, you&#8217;ll see where the writing moves beyond textual evidence and analysis and into&nbsp;<em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">interpretation<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>(and, at the end of the paragraph,<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">synthesis<\/i>).&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">THESIS:<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><em style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Tortilla Flat<\/em><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">and<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>\u201cBattle Royal\u201d<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">suggest that an ideal community can only take shape once materialism and the hierarchies that come with it have been abandoned.<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 2px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">POINT:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">There are vivid examples of actual currency in the two texts\u2014the pirate\u2019s bag of money and the coins on the electrified mat. Both images function symbolically and<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">show that<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">materialism\u2014and the hierarchy that comes with it\u2014is destructive to community<\/span>.<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION 1:<\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Analysis of the way in which Danny\u2019s friends protect the bag of money. There will be emphasis on the way in which the money \u201cstops being money\u201d and instead becomes representative of the bonds of the phalanx itself.<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">[Transition: An opposing set of images appears in \u201cBR\u201d]<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 6px; margin-left: 25px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">INFORMATION 2:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Analysis of the coins on the electrified mat. I will emphasize how the coins are a very tangible way to assert the connection between materialism and destructive hierarchy\u2014the boys are made to humiliate themselves and subject themselves to pain as they scrabble for the money, reaffirming their \u201clowness.\u201d<\/span><\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">EXPLANATION:<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The bag of money in<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">TF<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">is<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">a potent symbol of how<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">once money and materialism is removed from the equation, a community can begin to thrive<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">.<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span>The coins in \u201cBR\u201d<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">symbolize<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">the corrupting influence of materialism on communities. Though one text shows how materialism corrupts, and the other shows how the evaporation of materialism unites, they are both making the same fundamental point\u2014materialism creates hierarchy, competition, and cruelty, which are values antithetical to the construction of an ideal community.&nbsp;<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><br style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">9.&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\">Conclusion<\/strong><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\">paragraph.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit;\">The final paragraph of the essay&nbsp;briefly&nbsp;restates the main points of the synthesis<\/span><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;then addresses its significance.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">10.&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\">Source balance.<\/strong><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit;\">Given that the essay is exploring a relationship between two texts,<\/span><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><em style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">both texts<\/em><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit;\">&nbsp;get roughly<\/span><strong style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit;\">equal attention in the essay. The evidence and interpretation related to the Tolstoy novella&nbsp;takes up about the same amount of space as the other chosen text.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">11.&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"font-weight: bold; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Quotations and citations.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/span><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">All quotations are accurate representations of the original text, germane to the writer&#8217;s interpretation and synthesis, and properly integrated into the writer&#8217;s sentences. There are no stand-alone quotations; quotations are appropriately introduced and explained. MLA-style in-text citations are used correctly, and there is an MLA-style Works Cited page<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 12px 0px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; cursor: auto;\">12.&nbsp;<\/span><strong style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-weight: bold; cursor: auto;\">Language.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/strong><span style=\"color: inherit; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit;\">The sentences in the essay are&nbsp;clear, grammatically correct, and appropriate to academic discourse.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Write an&nbsp;essay of 1300-1500 words that&nbsp;synthesizes&nbsp;two&nbsp;texts: 1)&nbsp; &#8220;The Death of Ivan Ilyich&#8221; by Leo Tolstoy 2) &#8220;Three Deaths&#8221; by Leo Tolstoy Both texts can be found on the pdf I have encrypted below.&nbsp; In the essay, establish and demonstrate a significant&nbsp;connection or relationship&nbsp;between the two texts. 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