{"id":25561,"date":"2024-05-14T03:43:36","date_gmt":"2024-05-14T03:43:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/this-6-8-page-paper-double-spaced-should-advance-a-focused-argumentative-thesis-about-1-3-films-at-least-one-of-which-weve-seen-in-class-and-should-support-this-thesis-with-persuasive-an\/"},"modified":"2024-05-14T03:43:36","modified_gmt":"2024-05-14T03:43:36","slug":"this-6-8-page-paper-double-spaced-should-advance-a-focused-argumentative-thesis-about-1-3-films-at-least-one-of-which-weve-seen-in-class-and-should-support-this-thesis-with-persuasive-an","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/this-6-8-page-paper-double-spaced-should-advance-a-focused-argumentative-thesis-about-1-3-films-at-least-one-of-which-weve-seen-in-class-and-should-support-this-thesis-with-persuasive-an\/","title":{"rendered":"This 6-8 page paper (double-spaced) should advance a focused, argumentative thesis about 1-3 films (at least one of which we\u2019ve seen in class) and should support this thesis with persuasive analysis of specific scenes and formal choices"},"content":{"rendered":"<div style=\"margin: auto; cursor: auto;\">\n<div style=\"margin-top: 50px; margin-bottom: 50px; cursor: auto;\">\n<div style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<div style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<div style=\"line-height: 1; cursor: auto;\">\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Assignment:<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/b><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">This 6-8 page paper (double-spaced) should advance a focused, argumentative thesis about 1-3 films (at least one of which we\u2019ve seen in class) and should support this thesis with persuasive analysis of specific scenes and formal choices.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;Use definitely the film called, &#8220;Passion Joan of Arc.&#8221;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Process:<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/b><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">To arrive at a thesis, I recommend that you think about the topics and films that have interested you the most over the course of the semester. Think about what questions, themes, and ideas you\u2019d like to explore further in these films (or a single film). A great way to derive a thesis is to think of an essential conflict arising from a theme\/idea expressed in a film (or up to 3 films). This can be a matter of social or cultural commentary expressed through the film\u2019s formal techniques<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><i style=\"cursor: auto;\">or<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/i>you can focus on the meaning-making of the aesthetics of formal techniques themselves. This assignment is essentially a longer version of your scene analysis. Please refer to the scene analysis guidelines for concrete writing suggestions.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Review Comments on Scene Analysis:<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/b><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">It is also a good idea to review the comments I made on your scene analysis and to keep those in mind as you draft your final paper. For instance, if you struggled with logical transitions between ideas or paragraphs in your scene analysis, you will want to make sure to attend to similar problems as they may arise in your final paper. Similarly, if you struggled with a focused thesis, you will want to make sure that you are more concrete and explicit in your final paper. If your scene analysis had a lot of \u201cSignificance\u201d tags, you need to do a more thorough job analyzing the significance of your observations to the thesis you are advancing.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Final Paper Due via Turn-It-In link \u2013December 13<sup style=\"cursor: auto;\">th<\/sup>, Noon<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Grading Rubric:<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/b><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Please keep the following rubric in mind as you write your final paper.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">A\/A+ &#8211;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Clear, focused thesis communicating a persuasive and unique argument about to a well-defined central theme\/idea of the film(s) in question.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Close-readings and analyses of scenes and specific elements from the film(s) that are persuasive and specific and provide evidence\/support for the paper&#8217;s argument.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Unique observations and well-developed analysis throughout.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Logical transitions between sentences, ideas, and paragraphs that build an argument rather than create a laundry list of examples.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">A-\/B+ &#8211;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Many unique observations but perhaps lacking in a focused enough or argumentative enough thesis.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Alternately, a focused thesis with weak\/vague analysis and language throughout or close-readings that are not persuasive or specific enough or are presented without strong logical transitions and thus read as a laundry list.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Papers in this range all at least<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><i style=\"cursor: auto;\">attempt<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/i>analysis (rather than simply making observations).<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">B\/B-<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Functional observations but no central thesis or a weak\/vague thesis.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Some legitimate observations but generally absent analysis or unpersuasive analysis or analysis of a scene&#8217;s entertainment value rather than of a theme\/idea central to the film.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Papers that do not present enough evidence from the film(s) in question or present such evidence in insufficient depth.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Papers with generally vague language and unspecific citations\/discussions.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in; font-size: medium; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">C+\/C<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Bare minimum for the assignment.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Vague citations of scenes and\/or undeveloped analysis and\/or absent thesis.<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">\u00b7<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto;\">Papers that are only half the minimum length.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>Scene Analysis is attached below for help. 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