{"id":23819,"date":"2024-05-01T13:50:46","date_gmt":"2024-05-01T13:50:46","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/is-there-an-association-between-endocrine-diseases-and-primary-adhesive-capsulitis-and-supraspinatus-tendinopathy\/"},"modified":"2024-05-01T13:50:46","modified_gmt":"2024-05-01T13:50:46","slug":"is-there-an-association-between-endocrine-diseases-and-primary-adhesive-capsulitis-and-supraspinatus-tendinopathy","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/is-there-an-association-between-endocrine-diseases-and-primary-adhesive-capsulitis-and-supraspinatus-tendinopathy\/","title":{"rendered":"Is There an Association Between Endocrine Diseases and (Primary  Adhesive Capsulitis) and Supraspinatus Tendinopathy?"},"content":{"rendered":"<div>Please the apprpriate editis (AMA format) per the professor and combine the documents and associated resourses into one document. All casual language should be removed as this is scientific writing. Below is what he wrote me in a email and a link to a youtube video he created to help with the corrections.&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">1. Avoid conversational language and try to avoid anything that is beyond the scope of risk factors for AC or ST<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">2. Need to expand the details of the methods.&nbsp; This is your recipe.&nbsp; It helps the committee to guide you and to ask questions; its important b\/c the&nbsp;committee often discovers things that can help your process<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">3. (Please remove this from the main paper) I would strongly recommend not doing the qualitative component.&nbsp; Why?&nbsp; 1) You already work full time and you have to do the quantitative component, 2) the time it takes to recruit people, 3) the time it takes to interview, and 4) (main one) none of us have experience in this area to guide you<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">4. Need to redo the review of studies section.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Everything should be combined into the document (419_dissertation)<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><a style=\"cursor: auto;\"><br \/><\/a><\/div>\n<div style=\"font-size: 13px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><a style=\"cursor: auto;\"><br \/><\/a><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Please the apprpriate editis (AMA format) per the professor and combine the documents and associated resourses into one document. All casual language should be removed as this is scientific writing. Below is what he wrote me in a email and a link to a youtube video he created to help with the corrections.&nbsp; 1. Avoid [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[26],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/23819"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=23819"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/23819\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=23819"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=23819"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=23819"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=23819"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}