{"id":23361,"date":"2024-04-29T03:15:15","date_gmt":"2024-04-29T03:15:15","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/critical-analysis-of-high-obesity-rates-among-african-american-adults-in-the-united-states\/"},"modified":"2024-04-29T03:15:15","modified_gmt":"2024-04-29T03:15:15","slug":"critical-analysis-of-high-obesity-rates-among-african-american-adults-in-the-united-states","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/critical-analysis-of-high-obesity-rates-among-african-american-adults-in-the-united-states\/","title":{"rendered":"Critical Analysis of High Obesity Rates Among African American Adults in the United States."},"content":{"rendered":"
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The project entails a critical
\nanalysis of obesity prevalence within the African American community. I’ve
\ndrafted an initial idea paragraph and a concept paper serving as preliminary
\nsteps. Now, you’ll delve into the proposal section to elaborate further on
\nthe critical analysis which will eventually be reviewed and approved by the
\nprofessor. The first part of the project was the idea paragraph and the concept paper was next, followed by the proposal paper. The feebdacks from the professor for the first two section “idea paragraph and concept paper” is mentioned below.<\/span><\/p>\n

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This assignment is a 6- to 7-page double-spaced critical analysis proposal, exclusive of title page, references, and appendices ,
\nwhich should be included with this assignment.<\/b><\/u> <\/b>The Proposal
\nwill describe the Cumulating Experience project in significant
\ndetail. Required components are specific to the project type (see below). The project type is a critical
\nanalysis.<\/span><\/b>

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\n<\/span><\/p>\n

Critical Analysis<\/span><\/b>:<\/span><\/p>\n

o   Background.<\/b> Detailed introduction to the
\nhealth issue\/risk factors\/target population selected for the analysis.<\/span><\/p>\n

o   Specific Aims.<\/b> Listing of specific aims
\n(minimum two) including: (a) aim(s) of the literature review and (b) aim(s) of
\nyour unique contribution to the field based on aforementioned scientific
\nevidence.<\/span><\/p>\n

o   Methods.<\/b> Detailed description of how the
\nliterature will be reviewed including: (a) specific databases consulted, (b)
\noverview of search terms to be utilized (full list required as an appendix),
\nand (c) all relevant inclusion\/exclusion criteria.<\/span><\/p>\n

o   References.<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n

o   Appendices. <\/b>Full search term combination
\nlist required; others allowed if relevant.<\/span><\/p>\n



\nPlease integrate the feedback from the concept paper that the professor
\nmentioned below in quotation into the proposal you are currently working on.<\/u><\/span><\/p>\n

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Feedback from my concept paper<\/span><\/b> from the professor: “1.
\nPlease be careful about lifting entire sentences\/phrases from the source
\ncitation – always paraphrase (or, if it’s important to maintain the same
\nwording, use quotes). 2. In your proposal, please number your aims. I wonder if
\nyou may need a different search\/set of search terms for identifying the factors
\nvs. looking for evidence-based strategies\/interventions\/community engagement. I
\nalso wonder if doing all of that is perhaps too broad a scope. Perhaps you
\ncould consider whether you want your framework to focus on the factors
\ncontributing OR on the strategies\/interventions\/solutions and then your lit
\nreview can focus on one or the other instead of both.” <\/span><\/p>\n



\nAnother feedback from the professor for the idea paragraph I wrote is
\nattached below, please integrate this feedback into the proposal you’re writing
\nas well. <\/u><\/span><\/p>\n



\nIdea Paragraph Feedback <\/b>from Professor: “I do worry that your
\nresearch question is still quite broad, and it includes two completely separate
\nliterature reviews – one on underlying factors and the other on
\ninterventions\/policies to address them. It’s okay to have a two-part literature
\nreview, but I would suggest you do them in sequence, and use the first lit
\nreview to identity the top 3 factors for this population and then focus your
\nsecond lit review on interventions\/policies that address those 3 specific
\nfactors among this population.”
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