{"id":22540,"date":"2024-04-23T07:54:58","date_gmt":"2024-04-23T07:54:58","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/research-report-on-responses-to-the-korean-peninsular-conflict-international-crime-issue\/"},"modified":"2024-04-23T07:54:58","modified_gmt":"2024-04-23T07:54:58","slug":"research-report-on-responses-to-the-korean-peninsular-conflict-international-crime-issue","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/research-report-on-responses-to-the-korean-peninsular-conflict-international-crime-issue\/","title":{"rendered":"Research Report on Responses to the Korean Peninsular Conflict (international crime issue)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><b><u>Attached:<\/u><\/b><\/p>\n<div>&#8211; Assessment Brief (READ FIRST as its instructions)<\/div>\n<div>&#8211; Rubric (assessment criteria)<\/div>\n<div>&#8211; Assessment Task 1 (previous assessment that this assessment will build on)<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><b><u>Feedback from previous assessment task 1:<\/u><\/b><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>You have made a good attempt at examining the Korean Peninsular Conflict as a State crime however this was not done to the required standards. One of the main focuses of this assignment was what makes this problem worthy of being considered a crime, essentially this should be a running theme throughout your discussion and clearly set out from the beginning, you did not mention your examining this conflict as a State crime until the conclusion &#8211; due to this there was no discussion of what a state crime is and how this conflict meets the standard to be classed as such.&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>Much of your discussion refers to the conflict as being the main point of discussion however later on your refer to North Korea only as committing State and International crimes.<\/p>\n<p>More care during the planning stage can help to streamline your ideas. This can also help to ensure that all the requirements of the assignment are met.&nbsp;<\/p><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>&nbsp;The required word count for Part 2 of this assessment was 800 +\/- 10%. Your submission totaled 470. Due to this many point were underdiscussed for example the human rights breeches and treaty violations you mentioned.&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>&nbsp;Part 3. Some good points mentioned including the lack of references in the AI output.<\/p>\n<p>Referencing. Some good sources used &#8211; please note only 3 academic sources were required for this assignment. Some times having too many sources with a small word count can be overwhelming trying to include all relevant information.&nbsp;<\/p><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>In text citations where present were generally well presented please remember to cite all relevant sources and include page numbers in your in text citations even when paraphrasing.<\/p>\n<p>Please consider this feedback carefully for AT2. Ensure you thoroughly read the assignment instructions. Also use the discussion boards and seminars to ask question if needed.<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Attached: &#8211; Assessment Brief (READ FIRST as its instructions) &#8211; Rubric (assessment criteria) &#8211; Assessment Task 1 (previous assessment that this assessment will build on) Feedback from previous assessment task 1: You have made a good attempt at examining the Korean Peninsular Conflict as a State crime however this was not done to the required [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[34],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/22540"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=22540"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/22540\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=22540"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=22540"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=22540"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=22540"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}