{"id":22218,"date":"2024-04-20T23:15:20","date_gmt":"2024-04-20T23:15:20","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/the-industrial-revolution-economic-social-and-cultural-transformation-of-the-modern-world\/"},"modified":"2024-04-20T23:15:20","modified_gmt":"2024-04-20T23:15:20","slug":"the-industrial-revolution-economic-social-and-cultural-transformation-of-the-modern-world","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/the-industrial-revolution-economic-social-and-cultural-transformation-of-the-modern-world\/","title":{"rendered":"The Industrial Revolution: Economic, Social and Cultural Transformation of the Modern World"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>i already worked on it but i got some feedbacks and I need to my document to get fix , this are the feedbacks :<\/p>\n<div>You&#8217;re doing a good job providing an overview and summary of others&#8217; arguments, but work on emphasizing your own argument. Use sources to support your argument and interpretation as opposed to simply summarizing others&#8217; arguments. Think of each body paragraph as a mini essay that starts with a specific argument of yours that you&#8217;ll support with evidence, reasons, and analysis in your paragraph. <\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>there are more here :<\/div>\n<div>To improve the focus and argument of your paper do the following:<\/p>\n<p>1. Identify the topic of the paragraph<br \/>\n2. Identify the aim of the paragraph: what are you trying to achieve\/prove with the paragraph<br \/>\n3. what is your argument? An argument should not be a fact. It should be something someone can and would argue against<br \/>\n4. Does your paragraph have evidence and sources that you explain as reasons to support your argument for that paragraph?<\/p>\n<p>In an argumentative paper, as you support the individual argument for each paragraph, you gradually make your case for the overall thesis.&nbsp;<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>i already worked on it but i got some feedbacks and I need to my document to get fix , this are the feedbacks : You&#8217;re doing a good job providing an overview and summary of others&#8217; arguments, but work on emphasizing your own argument. Use sources to support your argument and interpretation as opposed [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[27],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/22218"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=22218"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/22218\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=22218"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=22218"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=22218"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=22218"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}