{"id":20486,"date":"2024-04-09T18:45:40","date_gmt":"2024-04-09T18:45:40","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/echoes-of-an-era-decoding-societal-reflections-in-oscar-wildes-the-picture-of-dorian-gray\/"},"modified":"2024-04-09T18:45:40","modified_gmt":"2024-04-09T18:45:40","slug":"echoes-of-an-era-decoding-societal-reflections-in-oscar-wildes-the-picture-of-dorian-gray","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/echoes-of-an-era-decoding-societal-reflections-in-oscar-wildes-the-picture-of-dorian-gray\/","title":{"rendered":"Echoes of an Era: Decoding Societal Reflections in Oscar Wilde\u2019s The Picture of Dorian Gray"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I wrote an rough draft research paper and it needs major work. I would like you to fix it based off of the instructions\/rubric, and personal feedback that my teacher gave me. &nbsp;<\/p>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>Feel free to change it as much as you want. You can delete ideas if they aren&#8217;t supported enough or are not needed. Just make sure it is between 1800 and 2000 words and has specific quotes from The Picture of Dorian Gray to support the argument.. Do not use AI.&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>I will attach my research paper and the rubric.<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>This is the feedback my teacher gave me:&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 2.4; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\">Overall argument needs far more specificity and focus&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 2.4; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\">NEEDS more evidence and close reading from The Picture of Dorian Gray (with quotes from the text)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 2.4; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\">Review essay organization to ensure that different paragraphs are saying different things because it is very repetitive.&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 2.4; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto;\">Use secondary sources to propel argument forward rather than remain static<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><\/span><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>These were the original instructions:&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div><span style=\"cursor: auto;\"><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 8pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">This draft must meet the expectations of the assignment:&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">1800-2000 words<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">3 scholarly sources (i.e. academic articles or book chapters)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Full MLA citations and Works Cited page at the end<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\">\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">An original argument about The Picture of Dorian Gray<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; background-color: rgb(52, 54, 61); font-variant-caps: inherit;\">a) supported by ample close-reading of passages in the text, and<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin-left: 54pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">b) advanced in conversation with your scholarly sources<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-left: 54pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Things your Final Draft should <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">also <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">include (check off the boxes as you write):<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">FORMATTING:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Proper MLA formatting<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> (see<\/span><a style=\"cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">here<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> for further instructions):<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Times New Roman, 12 point, double spaced, 1-inch margins<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">A proper MLA style header on the first page (Purdue OWL: &#8220;list your name, your instructor&#8217;s name, the course, and the date&#8221;)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Your last name and the page number in the top right corner of *every page except the first page* (e.g. Margini 2)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">A complete, perfectly formatted MLA Works Cited page<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">A good, non-boring title!<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">STRUCTURE:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">An <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">intro<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> with:<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">a good hook and<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">a clearly articulated thesis statement (Note: it&#8217;s a good idea to phrase your thesis with Author or <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Title of Text <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">as the subject, which emphasizes what the author\/novel is <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">up to<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Well-constructed <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">body paragraphs<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">. Each paragraph should be designed to make one big *point* that advances your overall argument.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Each body paragraph should have a <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">topic sentence <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">that clearly states the claim you&#8217;re making in that paragraph, builds on the previous paragraph, and clearly connects back to the overall thesis<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">A <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">conclusion<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> that sums up your argument but also contemplates the larger significance of what you&#8217;ve uncovered<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">QUOTES:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Quotations<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> from the text. With each one, do the following (the ICE method):<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Introduce<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> the quote and integrate it into your own sentence<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Cite<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> the quote with an MLA-style parenthetical citation (the information you provide in the citation depends on what you provide in the sentence. E.g., if the author name is clear in the sentence, you just need to cite page #)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"2\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Explain <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">the quote with <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">at least one line of analysis per line of quoted material<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> (note: just restating what the quote says does not count as analysis. With literary material, analyze the quote&#8217;s LANGUAGE!)<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Paraphrasing<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> of ideas from your <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">secondary sources. <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">You should bring in ideas\/arguments from your secondary sources quite often, but explain them in your own words&#8211;and then include a citation of the source at the end of the sentence.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Quotations <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">from your <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">secondary sources. <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Use direct quotes from your sources to <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">illustrate <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">and <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">emphasize <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">the arguments you present in your own words (i.e. paraphrase). Note: you do not need to close-read, i.e. analyze, quotes from sources&#8211;just the novel.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"margin-left: 27pt; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">STYLE:<\/span><\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto;\">\n<li style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Zero grammar and spelling errors!<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Zero passive voice or meta-discourse! (pv)&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">Phrasing *in the present tense* anytime you&#8217;re talking about what <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">happens<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\"> in a book or what the author <\/span><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">does<\/span><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li style=\"font-weight: 700; font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\" aria-level=\"1\" aria-checked=\"false\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0pt; line-height: 1.295; cursor: auto;\"><span style=\"font-size: 11pt; cursor: auto;\">A maximum of 2 &#8220;to be&#8221; verbs per paragraph! 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