{"id":20441,"date":"2024-04-09T15:35:08","date_gmt":"2024-04-09T15:35:08","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/enhancing-teaching-and-pupil-progress-in-primary-education-through-effective-talk-strategies\/"},"modified":"2024-04-09T15:35:08","modified_gmt":"2024-04-09T15:35:08","slug":"enhancing-teaching-and-pupil-progress-in-primary-education-through-effective-talk-strategies","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/enhancing-teaching-and-pupil-progress-in-primary-education-through-effective-talk-strategies\/","title":{"rendered":"ENHANCING TEACHING AND PUPIL PROGRESS IN PRIMARY EDUCATION THROUGH EFFECTIVE TALK STRATEGIES"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I failed my essay and only got 46%. My tutor allows me to resubmit by editing it. Please see attached the feedback form and the essay.<\/p>\n<p>Advice and targets for a resubmission:<\/p>\n<ul style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Engage more deeply with more relevant literature<\/span> and where possible primary sources rather than secondary ones so that you really understand the topic (e.g. Alexander, Mercer)<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span>Reduce the number of aspects you wish to write about \u2013 a narrower focus will offer opportunity to demonstrate greater depth of knowledge and understanding<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Aim to offer clear, detailed definitions of the key ideas<\/span> \u2013 this will help to exemplify your own understanding as well as supporting comprehension for the reader<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Use your knowledge from reading to accurately and objectively analyse practice<\/span> \u2013 think about the how and the why of what is happening<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span>Substantiate all claims with reference to source material or use more tentative language to suggest or consider and revise Harvard referencing expectations<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Ensure that theoretical models are introduced with a contextual summary. (Imagine that your assessor doesn\u2019t know anything!)<\/li>\n<li style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Pay close attention to your assignment title, ensure that you refer to it regularly throughout your writing process to ensure you are on course to provide a focused and relevant answer.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I failed my essay and only got 46%. My tutor allows me to resubmit by editing it. Please see attached the feedback form and the essay. Advice and targets for a resubmission: Engage more deeply with more relevant literature and where possible primary sources rather than secondary ones so that you really understand the topic [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[25],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/20441"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=20441"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/20441\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=20441"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=20441"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=20441"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=20441"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}