{"id":19813,"date":"2024-04-06T20:12:43","date_gmt":"2024-04-06T20:12:43","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/us-diplomatic-history-essay-which-analytical-approach-better-explains-american-foreign-policy-in-the-1890s-continuity-or-discontinuity\/"},"modified":"2024-04-06T20:12:43","modified_gmt":"2024-04-06T20:12:43","slug":"us-diplomatic-history-essay-which-analytical-approach-better-explains-american-foreign-policy-in-the-1890s-continuity-or-discontinuity","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/us-diplomatic-history-essay-which-analytical-approach-better-explains-american-foreign-policy-in-the-1890s-continuity-or-discontinuity\/","title":{"rendered":"US Diplomatic History Essay: Which analytical approach better explains American foreign policy in the 1890s: continuity or discontinuity?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Rewrite the paper based on this comment:&nbsp;<span style=\"color: inherit; font-size: 14px; background-color: var(--color-6); font-variant-ligatures: inherit; font-variant-caps: inherit; font-family: Poppins, -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, &quot;Segoe UI&quot;, Roboto, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, Arial, &quot;Noto Sans&quot;, sans-serif, &quot;Apple Color Emoji&quot;, &quot;Segoe UI Emoji&quot;, &quot;Segoe UI Symbol&quot;, &quot;Noto Color Emoji&quot;;\">You have a clear thesis statement and you brought some good background information in your paper. However, your structural problem undermined your paper&#8217;s argument. Just as I commented in your paper, your over-length intro and conclusion made you have no space to discuss your points in detail. Try to cut them, and provide a more comprehensive analysis of Social Darwinism, US occupation of Philippines, and the Open Door Policy will make your paper better.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">thesis:10<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">structure:25<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">evidence:24<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">persuasiveness:8<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">grammar:10<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">citation:10<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 0px; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.4; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Original Paper is attached.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Rewrite the paper based on this comment:&nbsp;You have a clear thesis statement and you brought some good background information in your paper. However, your structural problem undermined your paper&#8217;s argument. Just as I commented in your paper, your over-length intro and conclusion made you have no space to discuss your points in detail. Try to [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[30],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/19813"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=19813"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/19813\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=19813"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=19813"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=19813"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=19813"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}