{"id":16056,"date":"2024-03-18T16:04:18","date_gmt":"2024-03-18T16:04:18","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/colors-of-past-and-present-using-paleontology-rewrite-by-incorporating-feedback-given\/"},"modified":"2024-03-18T16:04:18","modified_gmt":"2024-03-18T16:04:18","slug":"colors-of-past-and-present-using-paleontology-rewrite-by-incorporating-feedback-given","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/questions\/colors-of-past-and-present-using-paleontology-rewrite-by-incorporating-feedback-given\/","title":{"rendered":"Colors of past and present using paleontology. Rewrite by incorporating feedback given."},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Feedback given: Strong start, then gets rougher and more like a technical report. The content is mostly in place, the communication style needs work.<br \/>\nIf the methods are meaningful to your narrative, explain that. Many are mentioned but why?<br \/>\n-Digest some of the quotes. You can repackage them for your audience and it will make the article easier to read.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Find a study that shows a positive connection\/ impact of paleontology on the world. The intro hints at this but there&#8217;s no data-driven support (&#8220;X % of adults feel<br \/>\nor natural history museums account for # school outings, ect ect)<br \/>\n-Needs a free-to-use image. See overview for tips on locating that.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Feedback given: Strong start, then gets rougher and more like a technical report. The content is mostly in place, the communication style needs work. If the methods are meaningful to your narrative, explain that. Many are mentioned but why? -Digest some of the quotes. You can repackage them for your audience and it will make [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/16056"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=16056"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/16056\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=16056"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=16056"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=16056"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.writemyessays.app\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=16056"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}