What Public Health Strategies are Most Effective in Preventing Intimate Partner Violence Among Adolescents?

This is my professor comment on this one i did

I have reviewed your presentation on adolescent IPV. Please see my comments below. IN order to get a grade high enough to keep you in the program, I need you to make these changes and re-submit the presentation.

1. Be clear in the beginning that you are talking about adolescents in the US. Not clear if your points are relevant to adolescents in other countries.
2. On some slides, your narration does not match your text. It is good that you are not including a lot of text on slides. But what you say should relate to whatever text you do include on the slides. For instance, on the slide entitled “Understanding Adolescent IPV”, nothing you say relates to anything written on the slide. This needs to be fixed.
3. On the slide where you talk about Safe Dates and Dating Matters, the slide only mentions Safe Dates. You speak about both programs but there is nothing on the slide that relates to Dating Matters. Why is that?
4. On your Recommendations slide, you mention two points that are not mentioned on the slide. Again, the narration and the text do not match.
5. The “CDC Risk and Protective Factors” slide is out of place. This slide should be right after you talk about the public health approach to this problem. This slide should help your listener understand why the Safe Dates and Dating Matters programs work to prevent adolescent IPV.

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