Use the space provided to explain why you want to go to medical school. (Med school personal statement)

I will attach my first draft, but I need a better hook and strong ending and also more changes to why I want to be a doctor. I will attach my resume and other documents I worked on to write my essay. it has info about the volunteering and related stuff I have done. I will also attach related essays of my friends where you can see how they related their experience to why they want to go into med school and become a doctor. I need strong hook and strong ending. you can also search online to find other example med school application essays and get some inspiration from them. Please dont use AI. Also I want to change my perspective on the essay. Current perspective is little negative, and focuses on too much on negative feelingsand experiences. I mean it says mostly what type of doctor I dont want to be. I want to change that perspective and talk more about type of doctor I want to be. Also I dont want to talk too negatively about the doctors in Georgia. I attached 2 resumes, one is for CNA job applications and other one is for research job applications.