Rewrite the paper based on this comment: You have a clear thesis statement and you brought some good background information in your paper. However, your structural problem undermined your paper’s argument. Just as I commented in your paper, your over-length intro and conclusion made you have no space to discuss your points in detail. Try to cut them, and provide a more comprehensive analysis of Social Darwinism, US occupation of Philippines, and the Open Door Policy will make your paper better.
thesis:10
structure:25
evidence:24
persuasiveness:8
grammar:10
citation:10
Original Paper is attached.
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