change the date to May 13, 2025feedback from my professor:
“I can see the effort you’ve put into this, and it’s a strong first draft. My main suggestions are to revise the writing for clarity (some parts are a bit difficult to follow) and to tighten the overall organization of the paper. Also, the case studies are a bit short, compared to the literature review. You can shorten the literature review by making the writing concise and streamlining its structure. You can then expand the case study section to provide a more balanced analysis.
Overall, you are on the right track!”
please revise this and change or add what her feedback needs. Thanks
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