Here is the feed back I received from this paper
This paper does not meet the requirements of the assignment as there is no clear central thesis that involves criminological theory and or crime causation. It appears that large chunks of material were copied and pasted as the formatting alternates from single spaced to double spaced, to then different fonts and formats. This paper when appropriately double spaced has almost four pages of uncited material in the analysis section: This is plagiarism.
Going forward in this re-we rite I need a clear centre thesis and a clear narrative and citations
I’m trying to say the Tupac had a huge impaced on crime and but promoting good morals though his music especially in the song “keep yah head up”
Please have this back to me asap
Feel free to add on or take out some things however please keep the length