my professor re-marks This paper plagiarizes by mentioning sources in-text that aren’t on the works cited page and missing page numbers where they are required. Those instances are highlighted here in Canvas. To receive a grade on this paper, you will need to correct those.
The introduction does not have an interesting hook, which most professors will expect. It is also missing a thesis statement, which professors will want at the end of the introduction. Your thesis needs to be a single sentence that explains the topic of the paper and its major parts/argument.
The logic of the paper still does not make sense. If you want to argue about mental health and screen time, then that does not make sense in a literature review about alcohol abuse. I can see that you’ve tried to make the angle here about digital treatment for alcohol abuse, but you haven’t presented any research that there is digital treatment for alcohol abuse for that age group. Those studies aren’t about alcohol at all.
When you write in the future, you need to pay careful attention to the required style. In this case, the headings and subheadings, justified text, and title page all have errors.