I began working on my dissertation and have already drafted the first three chapters, designed and distributed the survey, and collected 400 responses. I have also prepared all the required ethics documents and approval forms. However, I am currently stuck with several areas: Chapters 1–3 need significant revision to properly align with the theories, objectives, and research questions; the literature review is still too descriptive and not critically structured; and the methodology section needs stronger justifications, a clearer survey mapping, and a more rigorous analysis plan. In addition, I have not yet written or analysed Chapters 4–6, which must be based on the collected survey data. I am therefore looking for support to finalise and polish this dissertation to the standard required by the university guidelines, rubric, and supervisor expectations.
1. Assignment Overview
- Programme: Master’s in Digital Marketing.
- Dissertation Title/Topic: “The Impact of AI-Powered Marketing Strategies on Consumer Perceptions and Satisfaction in the Luxury Automotive Industry: A Study of Qatar.”
- Length Requirement: ~12,000–15,000 words (per guidelines). Suggested allocations:
- Chapter 1: Introduction – ~1,500–2,000 words
- Chapter 2: Literature Review – ~3,500–4,000 words
- Chapter 3: Methodology – ~2,000 words
- Chapter 4: Findings & Analysis – ~3,000 words
- Chapter 5: Discussion – ~2,500 words
- Chapter 6: Conclusion & Recommendations – ~1,300 words
- Theoretical Frameworks:
- Expectancy Disconfirmation Theory (ECT): for Customer Satisfaction.
- Theory of Planned Behaviour (TPB): for Customer Perception.
- Variables:
- IV: AI Marketing Strategies (personalisation, chatbots, predictive analytics).
- DVs: Satisfaction (ECT), Perception (TPB).
- Method: Quantitative survey (n=400).
- Analysis: SPSS (reliability, descriptives, correlations, regression, ANOVA/t-tests).
- Ethics: GDPR compliant, data stored securely for 1 year.
2. Supervisor & Rubric Requirements
The dissertation must:
- Clearly define aims, objectives, and research questions.
- Provide a critical literature review using recent (2019–2024) sources.
- Apply TPB correctly to perceptions, and ECT correctly to satisfaction.
- Show strong methodology (justified sample size, survey mapping, analysis plan).
- Present findings with graphs/tables.
- Discuss results in comparison with theory and literature.
- Be written in polished academic style with Harvard referencing.
3. Work Done So Far
- Drafts of Chapters 1–3 completed.
- Recent references (2020–2025) included.
- Survey conducted: 400 valid responses collected.
- Ethics documentation complete (consent, info sheet, debrief, approval).
- Data collected (Excel/SPSS file available).
4. Problems in Current Draft
- Theories misapplied: TPB incorrectly tied to satisfaction; ECT to perception.
- Research Problem: Vague, repetitive, not sharp or Qatar-specific.
- Research Questions: Overlap, vague wording, not tied directly to IV/DVs.
- Literature Review:
- Disorganised (order wrong).
- Descriptive, not critical.
- Theories defined but not applied.
- Gap statement generic.
- References not integrated critically.
- Methodology:
- Biased sampling criteria (age/income/gender restrictions).
- Mentions “1 million luxury vehicles in GCC” (irrelevant).
- Survey instrument details missing (no mapping table).
- Data analysis plan incomplete (no assumptions/effect sizes).
- No flowchart of research process.
- Overall writing style: Wordy, repetitive, not polished.
5. What the New Writer Must Do
Chapters 1–3 (Urgent – Submit in 2 Days)
- Introduction (Ch.1):
- Correct theory application: ECT → Satisfaction, TPB → Perception.
- Sharpen problem statement (Qatar-specific, concise).
- Rewrite RQs (aligned with IV/DVs).
- Fix sample size justification (use Krejcie & Morgan (1970), remove GCC claim).
- Literature Review (Ch.2):
- Restructure: IV → DV1 → DV2 → Theory → Gap.
- Add critical comparisons, not summaries.
- Apply theories directly to variables.
- Rewrite gap: no Qatar luxury auto study linking AI strategies to satisfaction/perception.
- Strengthen with top-tier sources (Dwivedi 2021, Huang & Rust 2021, Longoni & Cian 2022, Martin 2019, Rahman 2023).
- Methodology (Ch.3):
- Revise sampling (remove arbitrary age/income restrictions).
- Add mapping table linking items → variables (in Appendix).
- Expand analysis plan (assumptions, thresholds, effect sizes).
- Add a research process flowchart.
Chapters 4–6 (Submit in 1 Week After Ch.1–3)
- Findings (Ch.4):
- Run SPSS analysis (reliability, descriptives, correlation, regression, ANOVA/t-tests).
- Present results with tables & graphs.
- Discussion (Ch.5):
- Compare findings with prior studies.
- Interpret using TPB & ECT.
- Practical implications for Qatar’s luxury automotive sector.
- Limitations & future research.
- Conclusion (Ch.6):
- Summarise findings.
- Provide actionable recommendations.
- Highlight contributions (academic + practical).
6. Files to Share
- Dissertation Guidelines (PDF)
- Marking Rubric (PDF)
- Latest Draft of Ch.1–3 (Word)
- Survey Questionnaire (Word)
- Survey Results (Excel/SPSS)
- Supervisor Feedback Notes
- Ethics Docs (consent, info sheet, debrief, approvals)
- Meeting Notes (Word)
7. Deliverables & Deadlines
- Revised Chapters 1–3: To be submitted within 2 days.
- Chapters 4–6 (Findings, Discussion, Conclusion): To be submitted within 1 week after Ch.1–3 revisions.
- Final Dissertation: ~12,000–15,000 words, polished academic writing, Harvard referencing.
⚠️ Key Priority: Chapters 1–3 must be urgently polished to final standard so that analysis and writing of Chapters 4–6 can proceed immediately.