Please replace general telling statements with specific sentences that engage with the text.
Good to define the genre. But why is it important that Vikelas chooses to tell Loukis Laras through a memoir???
As mentioned of the rhetorical appeals, but please be specific in how the authors appeals to the audience on an emotional level. LIkewise explain or show how the author establishes credibility. DO you think Vikelas appeals to the audience on a logical level?
In the first body paragraph please replace the textual evidence with a different one that speaks to Loukis Laras as an antihero, making him more relatable to the audience.
In the second body paragraph please explain more the logical appeal. Different explanation is needed as well as textual evidence.
Try to integrate the symbolism and the repetition into the previous paragraphs. For example, you can easily integrate the point about repetition in the paragraph about repetition.
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Book link: https://archive.org/details/loukislarasremin00vike/page/n3/mode/2up