Rewrite topic: Restoring Authentic Worship in the modern church: Abibical Response to the decline of herat -centered worship

Hi Roxanne,

Thank you for sharing your dissertation topic and the heart behind it. It’s clear that this is something you’ve prayerfully considered, and I truly appreciate your desire to address such a meaningful subject in the Body of Christ.

You’ve highlighted things that are currently happening in the church—the shift from heart-centered, spirit-led worship to experiences that can sometimes feel more like performances. Your scriptural foundation is strong, and your emphasis on worship as a lifestyle is well supported with biblical references. That’s a definite strength in your writing, and your burden to see the Church return to authentic worship is both heartfelt and relevant.

As you refine your approach, please keep the following in mind—these are important elements the panel will look for in determining if a project topic is viable:

1. Why is your project worth doing?
   • Is it substantial (enough to explore over 60,000 words)?
   • Is it interesting and timely?
   • Is it original in its approach?
2. Will your findings add to the field of ministry knowledge or practice?

Additionally, here are a few gentle suggestions to help you move forward:

• The topic is strong but a bit broad. Consider narrowing your focus to a specific denomination, age group, or worship style so you can more clearly define and support your argument.
• Your current tone leans more devotional or inspirational—which is meaningful—but for a doctoral paper, it’s important to also include provable claims and researchable data (such as case studies, surveys, or church models).
• Rework your thesis statement to clearly define what you are arguing, how you will support it, and what the practical or theological contribution will be.

Because the opportunity for a 1:1 with SME (Subject Matter Expert) Shavonne and your final approval with Apostle Pamela has passed, please keep in mind that my feedback is only a suggestion. I am not in a position to grant final approval. That said, I do encourage you to move forward using the direction you’ve developed, incorporating these suggestions where possible.

Important Deadlines to Remember:

• Your draft 60,000-word thesis is due by May 31 for panel review.
• Your final version, with revisions, is due by August 31.

Hope this help.