Introductory essay for an art exhibition that will be included in the exhibition catalogued

This essay introduces the book of a retrospective exhibition or artist Sandra Binion. Attached website link. I am the curator and archivist. 

Tone – My intention is for it to feel personal but professional, and knowledgeable. I am allowing myself to be creative too. 
Things to consider- I am attaching a final draft, where I write my personal experience. I added one author’s influence as a “creative” way of imagining a conversation with her. I don’t know if this reads well and if it conflicts with the tone intentions stated above and ends up looking childish, or if it is a scholarly paper. 

English is not my first language. I need support in clarity, idiomatic expression, spelling, grammar and syntaxis. I also wish feedback on the tone and the fluidity, it feels segmentated. 
I want edits and suggestions made directly in the document or another document. The deadline is approaching. 
Thanks!
Sandra Binion website https://sandrabinion.com/home.html
My Final draft link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R1W5DdPuQ7fx_lCRaWTKEGBCRcXwbw0BpBYxR7KC8fE/edit

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