I am requesting a Discussion section of 2-3 pages + an Abstract of 0.5-1 page. I’ve attached the rubric and a powerpoint slide that explains what the Abstract and Discussion portion of the paper should contain. The “Benoit-Discussion” is my most updated version of the paper. Citation section and all other sections are complete.
Introduction requires further development. Please feel free to improve my introduction. This is the feedback that was given from my professor:
“Good content, however needs citations. Please review APA format and add citations throughout. Also could use a bit more content development such as the indications for bariatric surgery (including any specific contraindications for either of the surgeries) as well as potential risks involved with each type.”
I will attach the 20 research papers that are being used to complete this Systemic Review.