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Comments on your presentation for HPAM 628.
- Purpose and objectives slide: You have a lot of text on this slide, which you don’t really address in your narration. Also, this slide suggests that your presentation is mostly about collaboratives, which is not the case. You mention collaboratives but this does not seem to be your focus.
- On the slide that describes public health approaches, you list several but do not mention them all. In addition, you say something about maternal mortality, which doesn’t appear on the slide.
- Right from the beginning, you could say clearly that successful public health approaches have several elements. You are going to focus on several of them in your presentation: strengthening collaboratives, empowering youth, building community resilience, and strengthening and expanding services. Then you can have a slide on each of these issues.
- On the slide entitled Analysis of Collaboratives, you don’t really analyze them. You just describe them. You need to focus more on the success factors, which you mention on the slide but do not talk about in your narration.
- It is not clear to me how the “Governance and power dynamics” slide fits into the presentation? It follows the collaboratives slide – but it seems to be about more than collaboratives? Thes power dynamics affect all public health interventions, right? Maybe it is part of background and context?
- You have a slide entitled “Barriers to Implementation” – implementation of what? It is not clear.
- Are you highlighting young people as a public health approach? Again, what you say about young people make sense, but it is not clear how it fits into the presentation.
- At the end of the presentation – on the Recommendations slide – you talk about mobile services. You don’t mention these services earlier in the presentation so this is confusing.
- The conclusions slide should come before the Key Takeaways slide.