Do our families and the people outside our families who choose to mentor or help us mean more or less than the work we put into our developing our own success?

Your paper should be at least TWO complete pages in length (even one line less than two pages is too short), double-spaced, with one-inch margins top, bottom and both sides. Using the book the Outliers by Malcom Gladwell , 

Thesis Statement : Families and mentors who choose to help us have a larger influence in developing our success because of the ways that they influence our world view, provide access to resources and affect our confidence in our own abilities.

1. Be an obvious attempt to follow the assignment;
2. Have a thesis statement at the end of the introduction;
3. Have an organization that is logical and easy to follow, making serious use of the “they say, I say” design and relevant templates;
4. Have a well-developed (as in detailed and specific) discussion, including thorough descriptions and explanations of Gladwell’s ideas in all the body paragraphs;