I did a group of professional devolpment activites and my task was to make a reflection
on them then make a career plan after that. I did bad writing due to no time. so i got a
bad grade here what the professor said about my assigment:
| (This assignment shows a fair level of work. Your assignment shows fair understanding to the module. You were supposed to provide a real thorough reflection to the activities that you undergone throughout the semester. From what I read in task 2, your reflection is poor and vague. It seems that you used a poor rephrasing writing platform because you used vague words and you have alot of grammatic mistakes and meaningless sentences that was really hard for the reader to understand. You lost alot of marks by doing so. In task 3, your Personal development plan also have vague words which did not convey a logical meaning. You should work on improving your writing skills.) I am attaching my assigment below with the cpd activites I made in the table. Please |