This is a research paper that is supposed to have sources referenced throughout the paper with footnotes. One to two sentences for quotes. I have previously assigned this paper to be written and now it needs to be rewritten because my teacher gave back some pretty heavy and demanding feedback/changes. Her feedback is as follows: Hi Leila – thank you for sharing your paper with me. It is a fascinating look at the power of corporate imagery and media, both for good and for ill. Unfortunately, it also needs some work for the final draft to pass. I am highlighting the major edits below:
- Introduction (1 page)
- Background on racism in advertising and media, including early rebranding (2-3 pages)
- Analysis of studies on racism in media and its impact (2-3 pages)
- Analysis of corporate responsibility to address racist logos and right past wrongs (2 pages)
- Deeper analysis of the specific brands that have done rebranding post-George Floyd (Aunt Jemima, Uncle Ben, any others from that time) (2-3 pages)
- Argument that corporations have a responsibility to do more
- Conclusion
if you find any scholarly sources or any primary sources that can be used for this paper that are from good academic places like Jstor or google scholar you may add it if it seems fit. No AI can be used on this paper and no plagiarism. There has to be at least 3 footnotes per page. Please focus on going in depth on the sources that include research. My teacher has emphasized that I merely stated one sentence and did not go in enough depth about the research found so please deepen those parts. Please follow the exact structure my teacher gave under the header “restructure”. Attached is my teachers suggestions and notes on the original paper, as well as the quotes and sources that I have (feel free to add more if needed, not too many however, no more than 10 more. Primary sources would be great) . I received a 75%, and need a 100% this time because the final draft makes a significant part of my grade.