can you help me make my writing attached better?(e.g grammar, word choice also anything that I missed but are required) And also add some quotations from the book in the writing.
Please check if I meet the requirements below, if not please help me corr it.
For the introduction, start with an expository lead or HOOK. For this assignment, the teacher is asking for a PERSONAL RESPONSE. Therefore, you will have to write in the FIRST PERSON(I/ME/MY)FOCUS ON IDEAS AND ON STYLE, PERSONALITY, AND VOICE. (Include some personal thoughts and experiences)
Do make specific references to the novel, and integrate two or three well-chosen quotations in the book in the writing.
A thesis statement is needed(usually the last sentence in the introduction), and a reworded thesis(usually found near the beginning of the conclusion)
fyi: i am a grade 11 student studying in Canada. Moved to CA at 16 with my family.
Original, unique and creative, purpose focused.
ideas fully developed(e.g point>example>explain etc.)
engaging tone and good word choice
In about 500-800 words.(No more than that)
please don’t use AI to generate
PLEASE UPLOAD THE FINAL COPY IN WORD DOC. THANK YOU.