PLEASE EDIT THE PAPER FOR THIS FEEDBACK GIVEN: Hi , this is more than great for the intermediate draft. I have three suggestions: (1) you may want to trim some parts to make your paper more coherent; for example, you mentioned interviews and also comparative analyses from three different countries; perhaps you should focus on either and remove the other. (2) the next step would be to find the focus and structure; for example, you could divide the parts into ethical/economic/cultural implications and locate your analysis in each implication. (3) I believe your current recommendations are too broad and do not incorporate the analyses, but I understand it is still early in the process.
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