This is what the assingment was >>>For the first paper assignment, you are asked to choose one of the following topics and write a 4-5 page paper that analyzes the topic using textual evidence. The paper should be typed, double spaced, Times New Roman 12 point font with a works cited for the primary source. You do not need to do any other research, but if you do you must cite it, of course. The paper will be graded on having an original title, a clear thesis (or main point of argument), sufficient textual evidence that is analyzed rather than summarized, while avoiding grammar, spelling, and word choice errors. Douglass’s Narrative is often read as a heroic narrative. What elements of a hero story do we see in his narrative and does this help his audience be more sympathetic to his argument that slavery should be abolished?
REWRITE AND FIX WHAT IS HIGHLIGHTED look at the comments for help Change and fix quotes that need to be replaced
THis is what needs to be fixed : You have a number of interesting ideas here but the paper is confusing. There are some assertions that make broad generalizations about Douglass but little in depth analysis. There’s no follow through and the paper jumps to a new idea rather quickly. There are references to things that are not a part of Douglass’s Narrative and not enough direct analysis of the actual Narrative itself. Are these references from other writings by Douglass? You cite Boston a number of times, but who exactly is that? Are the quote Boston’s or Douglass’s? At times I know they are Douglass, but you are citing them as Boston’s. The quotations you use don’t connect with the points of your paragraphs. You reference Stevens, but don’t explain who that is and at times switch to female pronouns.
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