It is an Interdisciplinary Studies Class capstone. My topic is Implementation of More Detailed Concussion Protocols in the NFL and how that will improve player safety. My cognates are sports management for the rules aspect and science ffor the concussion part. I constructed a thesis “New technology and new techniques in neurological assessments have improved our understanding of
concussions. Proper concussion diagnosis and management have greatly
improved with continued medical research and innovation. Research and
implementation of up-to-date concussion science is critical for player safety
and long-term well-being.” It needs to be a 20 page paper not including the
title or reference page. I am attaching a formatting guide, an outline format,
and an Anotated Bibliography. The formatting guide provides the format of the paper and how she wants us to use quotes . She wants more of the paper than not to be quotes. I dont need the reference page to be completed just a list of
the sources done. 10 of the 15 sources need to be academic sources. We need to have at least main 3 points but I want 5 or 6. I have some ideas for points but it can deviate from what I’ve provided. Point 1 consequences of concussions,
Point 2 Rate and threat of concussions, Point 3 Concussion prevention, Point 4 NFL. concussion incidents, Point 5 NFL concussion protocol faults, Point 6
suggested improvements of concussion protocol. The paper needs an
introduction and conclusion.